#IveNeverDuckedSwag. MURDER, 1. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-13 20:17:40

get ready for me now Cake.. MM Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-13 22:10:04

it's murda... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-15 00:54:36

Suprised to see no votes on such good battle. Cake : GRizzEAT You Can't Be Considered A Great DUCKING AND SHIT, Not Writing Back Is TOUGH JUST ADMITT Cause Responding To "EtH Verse Would Have Been Balls Deep" Like When I'm FUCKING YA BITCH... ---- ducking personal was ok, eth personal was ok,punch was average to the best, structure was ok,scheme was below par. TOUGH JUST ADMIT ruined your scheme honestly. -------- You MISGUIDED IN THIS, You Have A Blind Man WALKING FORM & After Ducking Old Boy You Stop Getting PROPS FROM NORMS So If You Hear They "Rate: You Star" Peeps TALKING PORN...[RachelStar] You'll LAY WIDE OCK If You Try To Throw a STRAIGHT AN ROCK, I'll Duck GREATLY FLOP than "Respond With A Right Now" Like A BLIND DROP...[Write] ------- Now here you again said how he ducked etc. that becomes a played concept in a single battle itself. U used it in a opener and the personal isn't solid enough that you can create some good outta it while using it repeatedly. Wordplay Rachel star was garbage, It may connect but in any way u cannot make rate you star and rachel star pronounce in same way. Also porn concepts are hella used in almost 1 off 3 battles. In next line the write/right play was very much basic also wordplay didn't work for me tbh... it was forced. Rhymes were broken everywhere to be honest. Punches need to be executed properly in your verse. -------- MURDA MUSIC Is WORTHLESS STUPID, I Don't Pay MIND TO CHILDS I Wouldn't See Ya "Circle Around The Block" If You Was Tryna FIND A HOUSE... Theres a Difference Between Us, See Bruh I Give These People 'People Punches On Stage' When My Words CLASH AT YA DOME When People Hear Your Verse They Left To Say Who? Cause You RAP LIKE MIKE JONES Bring That Weak Shit Here & I'll Literally Give These "People Punches On Stage" Until This Look Like MATHJONES... But Fuck Ya Crew Of Clones, Ya'll SERIOUS SOFTY CHUMPS, I' Usually Don't Go Between Nerds But I'll 'Air Row Between Words' Like My PREVIOUS MULTI PUNCH... I'll Load Em Up In A Cannon, Let This GEEK GET SLOPPY BRUH & He Can Be "Fly Til He Die" Like THREE 6 MAFIA... ------ explaining the whole part directly as nothing much left to explain tbh, punches were hit n miss, some were okay to the best while some didn't hit at all. Multies were broken somewhere , metaphors were average. Overall I have seen much much better from u, I honestly think here you werent able to get enough time to write your verse. I hope u come back better next time.. ------------ Grizzeat---------- Niggas actually cry to see ma bars.... Uon have AN ELEMENT AS SUCH... You based 1/2 ur verse ON TELLING KIDS I DUCKED Sooooo now ur bars register same as ur girl..."IRRELEVANT AS FUCK ------ AN/ON/IR in ur scheme were unnecessarily capped tbh. Rhymes were okay. Punch did hit specially the duckin part lol ----- *Warmy* tbh, ion look at him as one of tha YOUTH THATS SKILLED, But if yall want PROOF THATS REAL?? I laughed wen ma Yunguns were "Face'n Cake: But it wasn afv's BLOOPER WHEEL"! Lolz @ Ducking Eth.. U shudn HASTEN YA TEXT WEN FACING A LEGEND... Cause i'll knock ur "Head over there, then come back: w/ puns equivalent to comPLACENT DIRECTIONS"!Yungun ur tha FRAIL ONE IN THIS FIGHT.. ur bars are "Genially Dumb" & i'm a FELON WEN I WRITE..oh ma gosh, ur verse had sooooo many Blonde moments.. its hard to TELL WHAT IT WAS "LIKE"! ----- couple of decent punches out there, I liked the blooper wheel bar, hasten ya text when -- placent direction whole scheme was tight, blonde punch was good lol ----- uummm?? nigga.. IM balls deep in YO bitch while u MAKE YA WAY TO SCHOOL.. Talking bout u get her to do threesomes, but FAKING AIN AS COOL, wen its PAYMENTS MADE TO SCREW... yeah yeah yeah, it miiighta went down.. but shawty got her "CAKE AND ATE IT TOO"! ------ this one was a slow start but then punch came off pretty well for me though I must say the cake and ate thing is played. ----- this bitch done "Swung right into a fucking: but he ain on his EROTIC CONTRAPTION" cause this nigga cant "Break thru China: while im tha BUBONIC IN ACTION".. so if u saying "C'll flip thru current lines??: musta been an AQUATIC ATTRACTION"! --------- Scheme was bit broken tbh but punch was hard for me. Overall you had a pretty consistent verse with some nice punches. Now this was a decent battle, though I was easily able to pick my winner. My winner was better on all grounds punches,structures,s cheme and metaphors. My loser I have seen him doing alot better and I wish him goodluck for the next battles. Keep battling and drop fair b/d on my battles someday lol Voted: GRizzEAT /
Posted on: 2013-12-16 07:37:50

CAKED: your verse was solid, had a few quotables: "circle around the block/looking for a house", "air between row/last Multi punch" was decent. But then you had a few head scratchers like: "who?/rap like Mike Jones" & the "write now/blind drop" line was kinda weak. The "rate you star/Rachel star" wordplay was forced. I feel like you could've had a better Closer too... GRIZZ: started off slow, that's rebuttals was ehhhhh. But you got on track after that "face in cake/ AFV blooper reel" was clever, the "blonde moment/like" bar wasn't hard hitting but I got a quick chuckle out of it. The closer wasn't a knockout punch either... All in all, decent spar. Was definitely expecting more from the both of you. In my opinion, ya'll kinda mailed this one in... FV in (Mid-7 vs High-6) Voted: GRizzEAT /
Posted on: 2013-12-16 09:54:37

Lets start with Caked: Bro, the concepts need to be upped. Lately you've been using major played concepts. I don't know if it's because you're slowing down w/ battling. But the WP in this was forced as fuck too. I think this was an off one. Multies were off in some spots too, just sloppy work here. Closer was a nice idea, could've been executed soo much better tho. Not trying to be harsh, but you gotta hear it. Grizz: I sense you were a little off too, didn't bring it 100 here. Opener was okay, a nice little jab to start. Like the AFV bar, and an original approach at the cake WP. Next was okay too, nothing special. Like the blonde moment/like. You executed that pretty well. Rest was pretty nice, closer's wording was a little off tho. Basically, one had a better punch count and had better concepts to work w/ here. The fair's in, nice little spar tho here fellas. Voted: GRizzEAT /
Posted on: 2013-12-16 20:22:30