Expo: RiFF RaFF is from Texas.. & I saw this dude complainin on Illokwent's wall about how he should have more wins cause everyone thinks he's new, it's obviously his 2nd account. Rest is easy. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-11 17:07:44

Respect for answerin my call out.. ~1~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-11 17:08:00

Oh & for tha idiot voters.. Last line: "Back Exposed" ..if you use two mirrors you can see your back..get it? should be simple but this site surprises me sometimes. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-11 17:12:15

My loser here slanted rhymes to the point where it actually DIDNT rhyme at all. My winner had some decent setups but his use of wordplay was really forced. Wordplay has to roll off the tongue. You cant tweak a words pronunciation to apply it as wordplay. It also has to correspond with the sentence. My winners punches were jabs at best. If you want to make them hit hard try doubling up metaphor usage. Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-11 17:27:58

This was very very close but Dope Man edged it with slightly better punches, fairs in fellas Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-11 17:49:40

Winner was solid; the other just capitalized a bunch of words as I saw it. That's my perception at least, no hate. Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-11 17:53:53

Severe: You had forced rhymes in, out, and all around here. sometimes they were not even relevant in any way to your punchlines. watch your syllables man and try to make everything go together. The Team Death Match line was my favorite, but it could have been executed better. Wording was an issue. Just keep working on it my man. Dope Man: I really thought i was going to get more out of this than i did... You started out nice but then kinda drifted to the finish line, but it was enough. Fair is in fellas. Low-High Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-11 20:24:33

ight. so one came w/ a weak verse. i saw no impact from tha punches thrown. multi usage was cool, along w/ tha concepts, which weren't executed properly. i think if u setup ya bar right from tha beginning of it, & have a creative concept, jabbin towards that end punch, u cud do well. other had a personal in there that shuda been elaborated on & ended w/ a strong punch. a lot of filler here & there. some concepts were dope but had tha wrong setups. one asked me bout his last line, which is okay, but cudve been better, like a better worded setup & hintin from tha start u were gonna end it w/ that punch. Decent battle. Ma winner was more consistent punch wise, lotta jabs, seemed more prepared. Ma loser could work on his setups & actually leadin them up to tha end punch, actually, both cud work on that. Fair's in. 'Spect. Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-11 20:32:01

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Posted on: 2013-12-11 20:35:27

easy pick Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-11 21:13:53

yeah, i feel one was us all around better here, short sweet n to tha point. better structure and harder hits wont this battle for me Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-12 19:00:22

Good battle I'm a go with this cat for my decision a little bit better punches but dope battle no hate Fv Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-13 14:44:05

pretty good battle one just flowed better for me. Even though I didn't see any real stand out punches...no h8 Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-13 15:25:40

I see Tha Dope Man is runnin around catchin bodies Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-13 20:44:20

Good battle, Losers had some not so perfect rhymes going but did his best, Winner got this with clever lines, For tha voters? let me make tha VIEW CLEARER, & watch me cause this DUDE TERROR, cuz u weak! & it got me wonderin who made him leader of NEW ERA!? That was a dope line, All in all good battle Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-13 22:45:06

My winner put up a typical verse for him imo and my loser needs hella work. Mismatched multis which resulted in poor flow and weak punches. My winner could develop his setups more instead of relying on multis alone but other than that, it was a solid verse. If either need a play by play, p.m. me. Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-14 00:33:31

fair innnn Voted: LiLBearMuahfuga / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-12-14 08:37:04