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Jay Gatz (0%)

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Reppin: La Crosse, Wisconsin, United States

RhetoriK (100%) WINNER

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Crew: Dead Poets Society

Reppin: United States

Jay Gatz

Just because im white doesnt mean i cant write i can rap but i might as well stop with this crap because i hate every single freestyle everyone does its the same thing over and over like a rollercoaster but im not going down im coming up you cant even see me even if you had x ray vision they call me awol but your missing wishing i skipped a line or a beat but the only way im skipping is if were playing hop scotch but this isnt a game or a treat im from the streets where no one can affoard a sheet wether it would be a for a bed or a pen but your pigs stuck in the pen

RhetoriK

catch VAN DAMME KICKS and rope wrapped punches.. HANDS GLASS DIPPED if we KICKBOXIN NOW. your gourd'll leave bloodier than the bucket you SPIT GAUZE IN, WOW! I'm not a HARSH FELLOW, but your future's a sealed bag if you don't MARSH...MELLOW! 'Stay Puff' or i'll GHOST BUSTER THE BITCH IN THOSE JUXTAPOSITIONS. then turn your sis into a 24 hour smog service.. 'No CLOSE' HUFFIN EMISSIONS!! i'm not talking COSMETIC TOOLS EITHER.. when i say your MAKE-UP will CAUSE MEDICS TO ETHER.. you won't WAKE UP when i make MOD MEDICINE REVERT to bad oration.. in the end they'll stutter admitting they couldn't SAVE 'UMMM'! #rust

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Battle started: December 10^th 2013 at 11:25
Challenger joined: December 10^th 2013 at 11:46

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-12-10 11:46:35).

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RhetoriK <DPS> Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	Edit: it's supposed to say... "Sliminem, I'm not a HARSH FELLOW, but your future's a sealed bag if you don't MARSH...MELLOW!" Good luck...lol Comment Only Posted on: 2013-12-10 11:48:43
Nachoo	fv eazy. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 11:53:57
microdose <Agent> Exclusive Member	Damn you! That would have been hilarious...haha. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:01:04
microdose <Agent> Exclusive Member	To an extent, the argument you lament is valid (where's the talent?), I agree. It's an artform, there's much more to it than poppin' out insults like Redenbacher popcorn. However (although I get your point, it came off weak, I truly hope you just smoked a fatass joint if that's how you really speak), altogether, I endeavour to prove that I'm better, thus I must be the transgressor. This means inherent competition, so I'll finish you off with a simple composition (with a bit of precision!), hopefully you can, at least, envision a written. You're now a victim of hate;words such as "rape" or "violate", cause you got rolled like a crepe. Gotta play them at their own game LOL Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:03:17
microdose <Agent> Exclusive Member	Vote In. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:08:11
microdose <Agent> Exclusive Member	Makes more sense with the Sliminem bit, haha. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:10:02
Manhattan <LoD> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Alright one needs to work on his multi syllable game in order for those jabs to even really land at all....Come w/ more creativity and you could learn a thing or two from how your opponent sets up his bars and uses multis. My winner overall had the cleaner verse and a couple of jabs thrown in the mix but his flow was pretty smooth. Some of the rhymes read awkwardly but he had the overall better verse. Fairs in low to mid Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:56:33
GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> Scheme Champion	u cant start a battle off by saying just because im white, that shit doesn mean much anymore... O.G. murder something nigga. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:56:50
GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> Scheme Champion	but Iam hit me up if u wud like assistance w/ this shit. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-10 13:05:01
HIGHpothasis	CRISPY RETURN!! Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-11 02:09:08
Sean Cron Basic Member	one was more complex flowed better no h8, ps whattup Rhet, how you been man? nice to see u writing again. Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-11 23:36:26
Arsine Exclusive Member	pretty obvious who took this here. dont worry lil homie keep elevating. fairs in Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-12 14:48:49
AAsuna DAH god <occult> Basic Member	Tight one Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-12 22:18:59
Jdot Sowell Basic Member	abused Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-13 04:12:22
The Dope Man	one's rusty but took it wit ease ~1~ Voted: Jay Gatz / RhetoriK Posted on: 2013-12-13 04:52:04


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