misses Kw0n - Mrs. Kwan (Cat in the Hat ref) Kw0n is Wizard Of Barz,Bongers... etc. hmph.. Murdaa. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-07 22:50:48

Lord, tha name dropping. MM Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-08 08:03:19

[[[[[You quit AC's, C.A.R then MM, what a REP YOU'VE ESTABLISHED because you "owe these crews" like a -senior's SEXUALLY ACTIVE!- (oldie screws) Yeah, it was sad when everyone "kicks L's side" but I'm talking when "DYSLEXIC" IS BACKWIDS because only way your losses "are replaced with W's" is if -ELMER IS GABBIN!- (R - W, Elmer Fudd) ]]]]] -------> Couple of good punches out there. I had a laugh honestly. Oldie screws wordplay was forced in my opinion, I liked the elmer punch. Had you removed the forced wordplay from ur opener then it would have been a hard hitting punch. It still hits due to good personal in it. Props [[[[[ Class "sho got rid of this dog" cause he ain't have the 'DRIVE' WITHIN EM, so it's ironic when he got "ran over by C.A.R", it "killed off his character" like -BRIAN GRIFFIN!- And when talkin 'filler usage', (which you're a MASSIVE "DIVA" WITH) its clear you "always stretch in your entries" like -THAT MELINA CHICK!- (You just HAFTA SEE HER SPLIT it is NAT'RALLY A GIFT! :D) ]]]]] -----> Drive within em, ran over by car thing was dope. I liked the stretched entries melina diva thing too, you got some real good punches. [[[[[You're known as a 'traitor' and I thought that was SOMETHIN' TA "MUNCH" cause you "bite the hands that feed you" but still unable to -"STOMACH THEIR TOUCH"!!- Ain't no doubt those punches "misses Kw0n" how you were a big BITCH ON THE BOX! Your whole style has "gone to the pigs" like it SNITCHED TO THE COPS! You'll claim you're 'in the streets' yet "getting moves deflected on Tekken" s'the only time you're -"HITTIN' THE BLOCK"!]]]]] ----> Mrs Kwan shit was hilarious. Hittin the block/tekken was pretty obvious imo. Rhyming was lil off here imo. [[[[[- Now I'm "placing Hart in a bag" like a VALENTINE'S FORENSICS UNIT! A win? He can't "see from a peek" like a MOUNTAIN HIGH RESTRICTED VIEWS IS!!]]]] -----> Closer was good. Pretty obvious punch tbh but yet the way you framed i liked it. Hart in a bag, forensic shit was good tho. Overall you had some good set of punches, with some dope personals and some metaphors. Your wordplay game was pretty good except that one forced wordplay. You need to select more cleaner rhymes in my opinion. Rest it was a nice read, better than most of the emcees out here on this site. Props. ------------------ [[[[[ Fuck it, you "puppet" you think you're DOPEST ALIVE? I'm calling OSKAR, thank you for sending him, he's CHOSEN TO DIE. The fact every single truth is BROKEN IS WHY he's like "Pinocchio" how we can tell every word SPOKEN'S A LIE! Grizzy had you, bare back, he's BROKEN YOUR SPINE. ]]]]] -----> I don't find any interesting shit here honestly. You're known for your multi game but I dont really think anything that rhymes perfect here. [[[[[ Look at the mess that he's made with the lessons he's gave, he had you QUOTING HIS LINES, "Now Sandy, your next assignment? You have some OPENS TO SNIPE, and remember, don't try to bring up ROW AND HIS BITES." You wanted in Chloro and started COOKING YOUR SCHEMES. Thinking you could beat ILLo with your ROOKIE ESTEEM? You got bodied, getting murdered by the BULLY MACHINE, so it's ironic that after the loss, we "PUT YOU TO SLEEP"!]]]]] -----> Bully machine/ chloros/ put you to sleep was good. Row and his bites/ open to snipe etc was filler shit tbh. No punch in that honestly. [[[[[ But with this fuck? It sucked. The WORST OF MISTAKES, you jumped ship for that bum's clique when you HEARD OF GRIZZEAT. Battling you? There's no gain, I'll go "Cobain", shoot this NERD IN THE FACE and lead this youth to die by "suicide" cause if he says it's "MURDER? IT'S FAKE"! Murda nut hugs? Shut the fuck up. You're used to having RAPS WITH FILLER. He left Chloro cause he LACKS THE SKILL 'N saw that RULE is dead and CLASSICK WILTED, but his stuff's fly? He wouldn't get "buck, guy" as BRAXTON MILLER, which proves that I don't need the "PASS TO KILL HIM"! ]]]]] Here pretty filler shit used though. Suicide/ Murder concept is pretty obvious though.. Murda nut hugs/ Shut the fuck up was again filler. You just tried to rhyme most of your shit here but i don't think it had any punch in it. Overall your verse had couple of good punches but I have seen much much better from you. Your multies game was rookie shit while we all know you're a pro almost. Anyways my winner was better in overall structure ,personals , punches , metaphors , wordplays. I guess its a complete catasweep right there. So not a hard decision for me. Fv. I hope you return the favor back by dropping a fair full breakdown on any of my "good battles" lol. Alright.. Rates are generous. Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-08 09:23:12

that filler line on War's verse was funny, and True. No expo really needed, went with the better Multis, Punches, Wp, meta's, and less Filler. Voted, Fair. Do the Same. Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-08 18:21:39

A smoother flow and captivating concepts took my Vote... Fairs always. Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-08 20:01:59

One was straight to the point and it felt very personal..and the other delivered the same personal feel with a tad more play on words..i enjoy the wordplay aspect of a verse, i enjoy reading/listening to a line 2 or 3 time and catching that hidden flip that brings it all together..FLY VOTE CLUB Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-08 20:25:02

one was better with the punches... Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-08 23:42:44

damn this is too close to vote on atm..we'll be back to read this over again... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-09 00:32:29

War had some dope ideas some wasn't executed 100% but u brought through nice punches and cool multi's .. Lock had that smooth audio flow nice rhythm to the rhymes a couple cool punches but some lines were played and u didn't bring a fresh enough spin to them ... Votes in though Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-09 09:09:02

It was very close,it all came down to preference,I think warsand had some wording issues,like the MOUNTAIN high restricted line..it had a dope concept,you couldve done wonders with it if executed properly. War had some nice as fuck multies and similes,like the hitting the block line..it was sick. Flow was a bit choppy in some places because of the unusual intervals of the multies. Lockhart had some dope flow and continuity,like I never could fighure out any broken gaps in between bars. the put you to sleep line was good,i liked how you executed every bar,proper wording would work better in audio or in a live battle in my opinion. Other than that,I think in some places you had a bit of vague personals,like the Row one. Like i said,it was way to close,fair is in Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-09 12:38:47

fairs in Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-09 15:34:13

WarSand: You started off pretty weak mah dude. the "oldie-screws" wordplay was not working at all and reading your verse was kinda choppy about halfway through. The first half of your box was really a disappointment from my POV. You picked it up with the "bite the hand that feeds you" line but thats really played also. After that line you hit your stride with good set ups and relevancy but then on the closer you fell off again. Lockhart: you came with a good bit of energy here. i enjoyed the read. you brought punches and relevancy that your opponent lacked. I really liked this verse for real. Fair is in fellas. Don't hate, appreciate Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-10 09:11:53

I just feel this cat had a smoother flow both had good punches and entertainment though No hate Fv~ Voted: SAND /
Posted on: 2013-12-10 12:11:48

Form Nation! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-10 18:00:33

Mission Complete. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-10 23:22:27