Punchlines took it for me...other had good wordplay and personals...some was a little to deep... Rug rats line was dope Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-10 10:47:39

This was really close to me my loser had a couple decent bars but stayed more consistent than his opponent. Winner though his stand out punches were slugs and the losers were punches. Btw rugrats line? dope as fuck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-10 11:18:29

Cant vote but nice battle. The towellhead chick line was dope..... A/C Shit Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-10 11:57:04

Lmao! Both cracked on each other and made me lol One was more diredt w/ his punches tho'. I aint voting 'cuz I don't feel like it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-10 16:05:27

Aiiight going to break it down like this, Fidel I see a slight elevation from the last time I read ya shit, I say this cus u been elevating alot so there's not much space to move dramatically. Your used of vocabs have improved. Also u threw in some word play in there which to me was creative but could be less forced. some personal jabs in there which was nice. Best punch for me was the life guard swimming pool line. Nice sneak punch. I would have took that opportunity to knocked him out tko...... UnEtH, u started out with a different type of rhyme structure. Punch was decent, to me there were some played concepts such as the terrorist concepts. And typical Scottish people like to play the racist cards. even though it may have done some personal damage to the opponent, in a real life audience it wouldn't have got too much wow factor but rather woooo played racist factor. None the less best part was towards the middle but pity its played out..... Overall a close battle showing different areas of strengths and weaknesses. Fair vote is in. Mid high to high, no particular order. Any issues flip me an 8. I'll get to it when I return to the battle field.  Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-11 01:41:43

Bulls! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-11 04:17:44

CSWC. Bulls fuckin up your porcelain! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-11 09:48:32

“Eth n Nichol he” doesn't = (Ethnically) Your play is 5 syllables while what you was trying to play 4. Wordplay can't work when the syllables don't even match. if you removed the first "n!" it would be fine. But it wouldn't have made sense. You new that but decided to force it. Shoulda thought of something different. Make sure your spelling is spotless. Referring to "Bae". when you miss spell it breaks up the flow of the read and can cause confusion. Plus it's just straight up lazy... Seen you used it again. It's slang for Babe. If you want to win as many votes as possible try and stay away from obscure slang. I never heard anyone call a bird "bae". I thought you misspelled babe. You gotta take into consideration you're writing for a diverse audiance. And you're an Englander surrounded by Americans and other english speaking nationality's who chances are wont have a clue wtf a bae is right off the bat. It'll require a search. and thats if you're lucky enough a reader can be assed to do that. other than that the play was cool.... I gotta stop. This is why I never vote anymore. it's just too much work. I'll be here all night. maybe you can atleast take some food for thought from what I'm saying. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-11 15:26:19

I agree with the above comments. Ones punches hit harder, more consistently... PS: I was a Rugrat head back in the day, can't front #TommyPicklesForPres ident Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 00:20:58

Absolutely Amazing At One's bars. Definatly Made me 'Oooooh!' a Few Times and it was Smooth and easy to Real. I Flowed it in My Head and it Sounded So Dope. To The Other? seems as tho you were too agressively Grasping at themes. Now Mind You, His Verse Was Full Of Small Punches and Great Jabs but the Latter Just Did So Much More For me. FAIRS ARE IN! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 02:02:06

ok Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 02:04:54

fv nice battle. just felt ones punches more Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 02:31:35

Punches were hard. Vote back or send 8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 06:49:25

check me out Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 08:59:54

For me UnEtH was just better. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 10:54:14

LMFAO AC SHIT! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 13:09:33

EtH, learn to block people successfully if u keep coming to my page and telling me that I'm blocked blah blah blah. If I can comment I can vote. But since ur butt hurt I won't bother reading any of ur shit again. U stay out of mine too. U a mod right? Yeah delete and change any votes that doesn't suit ur liking. That's what intend to do all the time. Stay off page. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-12 14:38:14

Smoother setups for the winner.. Loser had concepts just reached an stretched too far to connect smooth. Fairs in. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-13 08:07:00