decent battle nothing crazy but one was just writtten better all arounf IMO Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-08 21:36:06

One had a few ok lines near the end One would pick up and go back down throughout the whole verse mine goes to the one just a bit more consistent Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-08 21:49:27

Close battle here fellas. One kept my interest more. But keep it up Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-08 23:50:21

Will give a breakdown when im on my laptop Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-09 02:56:06

First Half's Cool.You Made Some Real Noobish Mistakes Cake. Closer Was Good. Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-09 22:47:14

EXPO (Since I Seem To Be A Minority Vote): Eloh Stackz: First Half Cool, Seconds Half Garbage; Cake You Verse Sucked Except The Hispanic Line And Closer (Although The Hispanic Line Wasnt Executed To Its Fullest Extend) Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-09 22:50:17

I can always respect constructive criticism. Appreciate the thorough explanation Lock Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-09 22:59:32

fv Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-10 21:32:03

ELOH: the punches were definitely hit or miss on this end. At times your concepts showed really nice potential and at others I thought your concepts lead to sub par generic punches. I thouht the opening build up was well written and although it took a little bit to get to the end punch it was nice.. The basketball plays and the gay stuff kind of fell short for me, that went into the more generic section in your verse. Be sure to be more creative and original with concpets and definitely stay consistent so your verse doesn't have that up and down feeling to it... CakedOut: Had a few nice personal hits in there, i liked that it was direct. The hispanic line was nice. Opener fell flat for me, and the lies bury seemed forced, as well as the closer. You definitely had some nice lines in there but you have to keep the level of writing consistent so you have a heavy-solid verse.. votes in. Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-11 17:59:30

Pretty close battle here, winner had a solid 1st half of his 16. Fell off a little in the 2nd half, but still had some punches in there. Some nice wordplay, one was forced. The whole nameplay on his crew is also a little played, but still did enough for the win. Loser actually impressed me here, seems to have done a lot of improving in the past month. Should work on upping the concepts in some of the spots and try keeping more consistent throughout. Fair's in, close bout. Voted: ELOH STACKz /
Posted on: 2013-10-11 19:09:58

Good shit. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-12 00:35:58