wiping off the rust with this one hopefully it ends up being a hot battle lol i aint used to this text shit no more i make music i do live battles now Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 11:27:30

I'm have my 16 done tonight once I'm off work . Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 14:24:05

Okay, winner here was pretty solid. Some nice nameplay/wordplay throughout, good use of build-ups, and pretty decent execution. Some of the multies seemed a little forced, but nothing to throw me off pace. Loser seemed to focus more on the flow aspect rather than getting more punches in. Had a few nice uppercuts in there, the closer could've been worded so much better, nice concept though. Overall, the loser needs to incorporate more punches and better build-ups, not too bad though. Nice 16 here, the fair's in gents. Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-10 18:11:30

EPIDEMIK- looks like you got a bit of rust fam.. i like the fact you integrated concepts, its the lenght the lines take to get to the punch.. that you need to simplify, a bit too wordy, in the setups, try to be a bit more efficient in the bars to attain a higher punch count whenever possible.. DISS- a few creative wordplay, probably my fav was the make, out class mates... but then you threw some bad ones, chalk it up=outline bodies with, is hella played, retardy was pretty basic as well, and doesnt work both ways. when sayin it...'cut this retardy mustve showed up late? 'doesnt make sense when tryin to say it the second meaning. bottom line here . it was up and down for both, but one excelled a bit more in concept usage,, fairs in. Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 05:01:03

Good battle Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 14:29:50

Tbh this was real easy to decide my winner here. One was too simplistic and although had a couple of nice punches he was very hit and miss w/ them and also had some played concepts....Not to mention I seen you recycle a bar in here.....Not cool man at all that docked you major points in my eyes.. Other had an overall smoother verse w/ punches that hit harder. A couple of lines I wasn't feeling but was wayyyy more consistent w/ heavy punches connecting. Fairs in low to high Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 16:37:28

Best ive seen good work Dissizit Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 17:29:47

fire battle Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 20:20:35

Yo on the real. Fair as shit. I thought Epidemikk's verse was okay. I'll start with what I liked about it. It never ventured into stupid territory, and I can't say there was that much truly wrong with it. The wording was okay to me, and it seemed to rhyme perfectly fine to me. That said, there were a few times, especially early in the verse where dude stopped rhyming for like a long ass time and just rambled. That shit really breaks the flow of the verse. Honest to god, between "blasting the blicka" and "family picture" I honestly forgot what the rhyme even was. To that note, there was never a real sense of flow in the verse. Ideas were average, nothing stupid, but also nothing that every single person half decent here couldn't come up with. I'll throw out there that the "African language" punch was alright, but I already seen Left Field make more or less that same punch like five years ago. Dissizit. Yo maybe I'm missing the boat, but I didn't understand your first two punches. As in I didn't think that wordplay worked right. When you do a flip shit has to make sense both ways. You're flipping "retard he" into..re-tardy?? Yo what the fuck does that mean?? That shit sounds kind of retarded, honestly. maybe I'm just missing that shit. On the next flip, you what the fuck is a "sowed-up date"?? I realize what the flip is, but shit is whack if it only makes sense one way or isn't a play associated with it. What is a "sowed up date"?? Is he performing surgery on a date?? Is he dating a sow?? If it doesn't make sense, then you're just flipping the shit for no reason. I liked the rest of your verse in general, and didn't have many problems with it. I would have rated the shit higher, but I'd rather read a mediocre bar over one that doesn't make sense. I feel a little generous with this vote. Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 21:37:25

Damn yo this was a bar fest Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-11 23:09:55

Classick!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-12 08:23:03

CLASSICK u BASTIDS! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-12 16:06:54

fairs in Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-12 17:04:28

i think 1 out did the other in every category, although the losers verse wasnt bad, it was just ok. quite simple with the odd semi hard punch thrown in. the winner had some nice wordplay and the whole verse in general was constructed better than the loser Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-12 19:29:41

HARD CHOICE Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-13 02:04:29

mi like da drop bless Voted: EpidemikK / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-10-13 14:50:04