You two chose the same phrase to scheme off of.. one used "flashin" the other used "flashing" lmao. Wow. Anyways.. one was a bit too wordy in a bad way.. awkward phrasing here and there.. quoting associated phrases that weren't wordplay.. mismatching syllables for the intended scheme in places.. overall just a lot of shit that gave me the stink face, since if the poster were to say the verse aloud, it would sound VERY weird in some places. His opponent was a bit more polished all around.. the scheme was more fluid, the flow was absolutely better, and he actually had some decent lines. Posted on: 2013-10-07 22:59:10

Scheme Battle.....Scheme is COPS SIRENS FLASHIN. Good luck Let Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 00:33:33

Word to ya Mom. AC ISH Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 00:51:54

SEA* not SEE :/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 00:53:06

Damn.. Wish I could vote.. Flames from both though. Letum I was digging that Popeye line.. Manhattan that Hitler line was crack.. Can't wait to see how this turns out.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 01:36:32

Here's a line-by-line....MANH ATTAN: I'm not that "Type Of Vet" but I'll have this DOG DYING MAD QUICK So I got that ‘Frank Costello Steez’ Imma MOB GIANT BLASTIN Your being "Set Up- For This Invasion" like ya SPOTS WIRED, TAPPED IN I'll "Turn And Fire On My Own Squad- For Being Cowards" faster than when Hitler took SHOTS FIRING AT HIS own army when they were CAUGHT DRIVING BACK IN!!! ----Interestin start. Usually people don't take two lines to glorify themselves, but what made it good is it remained relevant throughout. Build up was good, Hitler concept was nice. ----So when I ‘Set It Off- You Could Hear It Everywhere’ like the whole Christian BLOCK QUIRES IN ACTION I’m tucking-the-guns-kid to be "Busting Ya Stomach" it would look like you GOT TIRED WITH LAUGHING ---- haha, idea was nice the way you went about in the build up was nice. The wordin got u extra kudos here. Nicely executed. ---- Your “Being Set Up As A Target- Within My Shooting Range” its SWAT FIRIN’ PRACTICE then I’ll have ya ‘Top Lit Up- At The Scene Of The Crime’ like when the COP SIRENS FLASHIN!!!! ---- Good bar. Once again nicely constructed. Did its job as a punch. ---- Ya NOT WISE N THAT’S IT cause No ones rocking-bros-shit only time ya “Dropping Those Hits” is when you were CAUGHT TRYIN’ ACID So You wouldn’t have an “Explosive Landings w/ The Drops” Even if you were to fly a Kamakaze BOMB FLYIN JAP HIT that had most of the SQUAD DYING MAD QUICK!!! ---- caught tryin acid droppin those hits???? i can't see it. First part of this bar was weak, didn't connect well but the 'kamakaze' part was crackin. Thought that you forced the multi's to keep em relevant but other than that it was creative. But lost a big of its sting in the build up to it. ----You have never even ‘Touched The Metal’ or a GLOCK, LYING WACK KID you wouldn’t ‘Hold Your Own Weight w/ the straps’ if you were ROCK CLIMBING ASPEN!!!!!! ---- You ended good. Fresh concept. aspen? colorado? yeh i did my research as a voter haha. I liked the build up to it kept it relevant which is important!. (FINAL SAY FOLLOWING LETUM LINE-LINE) Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-07 01:45:16

Letum ---- This stupid bulls the the type to run towards some COP SIRENS FLASHING! And if this lame claims he 'straight up ROCKS LINES'? ITS KHAKIS... Man wouldn' have a ''w in hand'' if his shotgun passenger was ''PAC'' WRITING RAP SCHEMES with Dre aka ''DOC'' RIDING' BACK SEAT.. ---- I liked your start. Direct and straight into dissin. That rock Lines bar was crack. I'm thinkin to myself though, you could've come up w/ a flip on Hattens final bar haha. Nonetheless still a nice punch. Thought "w in hand" was ight, not to strong as a punch though. ---- Still Man'll see 'claps n DROP'. -GUYS THA'TS ASS CHEEKS'' he hits bottom'' here's an ''L-AC'' now make like a ROCK MIGHT WHEN AT SEE!! (LA Sea /Westside) ---- Concept and punch was good. Wordplay was creative. Thought the multi's didn't flow well but that didn't take much away from the final punch. ---- He's sunk.. Call me ''God, son'' I 'made Man' (I quickly said ''PAUSE''.. LIKE MY BAD PEEPS) Let um gas em and pass em', so no shit ''NAS'' MIGHT JUST ADD SPEED, I'll go MACH FIVE N PASS HEAT so these hands come in ''hand-e/handy'' like that BLOCK LIFE FROM BACK EAST!! (Eastside) ---- Everythin was good about this bar besides the punch. It wasn't really anythin hard but i could tell there was quite a bit of thought put into it. ---- When I get that right point ah 'CROSS', EYES ARE BLACKING, he don't see in this BOX I'M AN ATHLETE so its ''game over player'', this is a BOSS FIGHT N LAST SCENE as I ''open a can, and my guns get bigger'' like POPEYE JUST HAD GREENS!! ---- haha, this was some good shit. Punch was stronger here, but still felt that it wasn't a strong as it should be. The build up was there, but the final part of the concept should've been stronger. ----He once had HOT LINES N THAT'S G, but this ''G strings'' em' along, while YA"LL RIDE THIS MANS D, lb ya'll ALL LIKE HIS ASS STRING, funny I bet ya'll know his BRA SIZE BUT CAN'T SEE his bars ALL LIGHT N SADLY lack points due to their SMALL RISE N FLAT PEAKS!! ---- so cliche but pretty funny haha. you did well to keep the bar relevant i actually thought you might've transitioned into another concept but you did well. Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-07 01:45:24

Overall, i thought you both did your thing. *I kept in mind that this was a scheme battle.* Both of you were equal in the multi's, flowed well and made it easy to read. You were both consitent with the build ups to punch; Execution wise i thought manhattan got the edge. But you all know, the overall vote goes to the person who came harder here. I'll drop two 9's for sake of hotlist. P.s. forgive the typos Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-07 01:46:10

This wasn't the easiest scheme to do 16 lines on, but you both had some awkward wording...one just a little more than the other. I felt my winner had some lazy schemes, as in some of the words were repeated and easy to come up with, but his message overall came out clearer. My loser had more lines (due to awkward wording) that required an expo or weren't self-explanatory. Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-07 12:36:06

Real tough scheme here, felt like it boiled down to Man's second half & Let's first half. Felt one was a tough more consistant, but both did well with a difficult scheme. 1/ Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-07 18:49:12

#PoLoGang Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 02:07:38

Ac Gang! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 05:06:04

felt like one struggled with the scheme a lil... the other did as well in areas but overall had a better verse... fair dropped... Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-08 14:17:22

Manhattan: that was really well written. you followed the scheme all the way through and still delivered some haymakers. "I’ll have ya ‘Top Lit Up- At The Scene Of The Crime’ like when the COP SIRENS FLASHIN!!!!" that was fresh man... i really liked it. after that line you just took off. you started a little slow though but picked it up and ran with it to the finish line. really nice drop here. Lock: i agree that this scheme was harder than some to write 16 lines on... and i could tell you were having a little trouble trying not to force your multis. Your verse had kind of a choppy flow to it that took away from the overall rating... you still had some good punches but no haymakers IMO. set ups were there too but not as good as the opponent. This was a good battle guys. Fairs in. Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-09 23:03:26

Why Did You Say Got Tired WITH Laughing? Letum Really Likes Hands .-. Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-09 23:14:24

This Was Close Though; Good Battle Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-09 23:15:04

Lizman get ya retarded ass off my battles Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-10 00:03:13

By Consistency, You Got It. By Execution, You Got It. By Technicality You Would Have Gotten It If The Other Opponents Approach Would Have Solely Involved Creativity. However The Opponent Had The Creative And Stronger Haymakers. Your Top Burned W.e Line (You Sure Like Talking About Tops) Was Generic And Overused As Always And The Other Punches Were Not Much Better. I Did Like The Hitler Scheme, However You Took Way Too Long To Explain The Punch Mid Battle. The Closer Was Good Though. Your Opponents Overal Verse Quality Was Weaker, However He Had A More Creative Approach Plus His Strongest Punches Were Stronger Than Yours. The 'W In Hand' Punch Wasnt Necessarily Strong But It Was Good And I Never Heard It Myself. You Lost. But In This One I Wouldn't Fault Anyone Giving This One To You. I Liked It (Solely Because Of The Scheme Tbph). Good Battle. Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-10 00:18:16

Happy Now Kid? Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-10 00:18:34

I just think its funny how were beefing and you vote on my battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-10 00:27:35

I Only Refrain From Voting On Battles Of People I Hate And People I Have An Ongoing Text Battle With. Voted: Manhattan / Letum
Posted on: 2013-10-10 00:37:02