Taking this Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 22:22:30

My bad just got home and hit the comp up. Good shit G Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 23:16:46

Me too i dont even do this ne more for free Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 23:20:40

Manhattan stop sniping dude lol i been gon for 2 years come back and see you sniping a shit load of battles...fv in though none of you guys really impressed me tbh... Voted: O_G / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-10-06 23:25:21

Wow! Loser usually comes a lot harder... punches won this for me, both y'all got my respect in these boxes...fv Voted: O_G / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-10-07 09:40:05

OG: you obviously have the basics down... your multis and everything were on point and your punches were mediocre but the problem, for me, was in your set ups. its like you were just throwing random punches sometime. "n I would whoop yo.ass but u SURE TO CALL THE COPS.. bet u. Can bet u gettin cornered like u WORKIN OFF THE BLOCK .. im like a "sky.diving Sheppard " I HURT/HERD EM 'OFF THE TOP" none of those 3 lines have any relevancy to each other in my eyes.. but the form and flow is all there. still a good read though. MH: this was a really solid verse.. i was diggin it, you go from one scheme to the next and it doesnt really matter to the reader. "lking about you CARRY A RATCHET?? shits not SCARY, YA WACK BITCH I'll 'Kill You w/ an Axe and Hide the evidence' I'll really "BURY THE HATCHET"!!!!" that line was dope along with the opener. not much else to say cause everything was there for me. Really clean verse. liked this read. Fair is in. high-high Voted: O_G / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-10-08 01:23:34

nice verse,OG...not voting because my beef with Faghattan Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 09:49:58

O_G: Not very consistent IMO.. There was a few fillers and self glory and the rest of the punches more or less seemed like they were just glorified off of your normal generic concepts. I have seen much much better from you than this. The flow however was clean and the verse read smoothly from start to finish... Manhatten: Your opener had a cool play off the crew, direct and personal always gets you bonus points in the eyes of the voter, however the build up was a bit awkward and it took too long to get to the ending punch, imo.. The 'bury the hatchet' bar was dopish.. I liked it, the closer feel flat imo. It still was a punch attempt but it just wasn't hitting for me due to the concept and set up of it.. Your verse also flowed well and was a bit more consistent 'throwing punches' wise, But you could have definitely fit another punch in there.. I basically see 3 build ups and punches in an 8 line battle, there should def be more than that.. Short and sweet, make it smooth. .. Votes in. Voted: O_G / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-10-09 17:15:18