GL FAM! Its CERTIFIED DOPE either way! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 22:06:54

Certified dope shit... Gl my guy Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 23:41:02

lmao at how u both went at the "betrayal" theme.. however, that being said, I believe one executed a concept better than his opponent imo.. plus, my winner drew me into the concept as soon as he began, so I kinda knew where it was gonna go, then when I rest the rest, it sealed the way for me.. his opponent, on the other hand, didn't, and that doesn't take anything away from the bar, I was just hoping to see an introduction into the concept in the beginning of the bar, not the middle.. Dope bout tho fellas.. Stay up. Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 01:57:51

read* sorry bout that Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 01:58:19

The wording sounded a bit awkward and forced in one and lengthy in the other due to how the multis were spaced out..and affected the flow .but one managed a cleaner concept to punch.relavence in setups were a tad weak also.. but I got my winner Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 05:01:36

Sway comment deleted but vote still stands Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 05:03:04

i got my winner one just had a better idea of where they were going with their punch Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 07:33:04

I thought ones punch here was just better written better. The other had a nice punch and wrote his smoothly. My Vote is in. Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 08:01:14

This is a Punchline tourney right? Both seemed more focused on the multis, which took away from the flow. I like how both had the same scheme. My fv goes to the one who didnt let the mutli distract from the punch.. gluck to both. Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 08:06:16

I felt both could have done better in maintaining relevance throughout, but one hit a bit harder. The other had a really weak metaphor which let him down. Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 12:18:31

Expo: who he hanga with stabs him in the back aka a nail in the wall hangs up a clock... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 12:31:09

was really feeling one. and i thought it was a clever line. the other was just a mess with wording. it wasnt executed as well as the opponent. fairs in. Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-07 16:43:16

never seen this before but i like it. my winner had a harder punch in my head. both of ya are beasts though no doubt. no h8 fv VBF. respect Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-08 16:10:02

This Is A Difficult One. I Didnt Like Either Verse. AB Took Too Long To Get To The Punch And Both Dont Have Any Hard Punches. No Vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 20:53:49

fairs in Voted: AmBitiousFlow / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-09 05:20:05

fv guys! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-09 06:21:47