One just absolutely had better angles. I really don't even need to touch on the other aspects of the battle because as a stand alone, that's a clear enough difference for a victory in my eyes. Like really.. one dude had a bunch of concepts.. some were pretty clever and others were meh. His opponent, on the other hand, also had a couple of meh punches.. maybe one or two that got a slight reaction out of me.. then the rest were just.. awful, failed attempts at trying to call the other dude gay. And it was just.. yeah that shit does nothing for me. Maybe if this were 1990 & you were freestyling and that's all you could think of.. but for more than half of your verse to be mindless gay jokes, and it's supposed to be WRITTEN?! Nah. Get more creative. Posted on: 2013-10-07 23:14:40

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Posted on: 2013-10-06 20:04:53

good battle. ~PUPPET MASTERS~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 20:19:04

¥Puppet Masters¥ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 20:42:05

GOOD BATTLE HERE. FAIRS IN THO. PM FOR EXPO Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-06 21:00:54

this was a dope ass battle, good to see one back on the scene no doubt, but damn, both came hard, one just executed better which made the punches hit harder, his multi placement was more on point. good battle fellas deserves the top of the hotlist... pz Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-06 21:49:55

Both used the scheme the whole way through but one did it while getting out a couple nice punches i really liked fairs in Good bout guys Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-06 21:53:49

AC's! similarity in those openers was crazy though. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 22:22:44

typo DATIN A BLIND CHICK.. dam but dope shit ILL Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 22:26:17

Claws had nice multis mixed in his verse..my fav line of his was the opener "baby provided"..being a audio head i felt his verse wasnt as clean as easy to follow..but overall a mid 7..illo also has nice multis going and a few bars that stood out..its sad that they had to do with male private parts but hey lol..i felt one was more cleaner n consistant..FLY VOTE CLUB Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-06 23:40:12

His name was six claws... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-07 00:46:45

Damn Good battle close one Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-07 12:21:59

Both used the scheme well and had clean wording, but one used more complexity and had harder hitting punches. Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-07 12:47:35

dope battle both has some craziness one just packed more of a punch imo definitely hot battle here though guys good shit Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-07 12:57:18

WarSand: i thought you kept the scheme going pretty well throughout with some nice concepts and a few punches could have been set up a little better. wording was a little meehhh, but it was an overall good verse to me. my fav line from you was " MAYBE IM HIGH N intoxiCATED N BLINDED but u nevah drop bars dats "fly/outta dis world" like an ALIEN PILOT?" if you coulda came with bars like that throughout it woulda have warranted a higher rating. Illokwent: this is one of the better verses ive read lately to be honest with you. even though it was a scheme it never got dull or boring. you filled it with really good punches here. " when 'bars toss', ya 'start soft'.. like CAKE WHEN ITS RISIN, and 'benz to my will' like PAYIN THE PRICE WITH a merCEDEZ ENTICEMENT" i just picked one line but i thought a lot of yours stood out but that one was fresh. Really liked this read. Fair is in. Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-07 21:53:21

WarSand: Your flow and multi's seemed on point from start to finish. Everything read through fluently, however many of your punches were a hit or miss. You either took too long in the set up or had a generic concept. I liked the "White bitch" line, but then the punch right after that you used a 'white chick' concept again, which is basically the same thing. There was also a few wasted lines of self glory that I would consider filler like the maskes and knives line. overall you have the potential and skills to write much better than this, I can tell from reading this verse.. So definitely work on being more consistent, and creative with punches. Polish it up nice and cut out any filler. It would help for the time being to get some feedback on stuff before you post it, that way you can start to perfect your verses, then in time it will just come natural.... ILL: overall I thought your verse was pretty solid but there were a few lines I thought were on the weaker end 'Bend line, south pole line' I also felt the closet line could be a little bit better worded also. I liked your opener and the 'dyson' line the best out of your verse. overall here both did well using the scheme and I have no mishaps with either of you there, that side of it with the multi's and flow made both verses for a nice smooth, dope read. I did, however, find ones verse much more consistent. Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-08 02:06:35

Nice spar here, felt one was more consistant with the hits over the 16's. Good job fellas. Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-08 02:25:12

fairs in Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-08 03:01:53

Ac shit Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 05:03:45

Great battle here guys.. fv in! Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-08 12:16:44

Good battle, fv. Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-08 13:00:16

Fair 1 Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-08 17:51:06

Dope battle,I like how ill took wars last multi and ran with it, fv in as always Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-09 09:49:01

Good battle, I suppose. No offense, but I couldn't find WarSand's rhyme scheme, or understand half the words he wrote. As for ILLoK, he had good multis and used a complex scheme for a rhythmic-ish pattern. gb, no hate. Voted: SAND / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-09 19:26:59