DSR is a sniper rifle~(D)reads (Skilligan) (Ray). hair rose=Heroes/ a show where Hayden Panettiere can fall without hurting herself and shit. will/wheel. guard Ray'll/guardrail. #Go2Sleep G'luck fam Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-03 15:49:35

Shhhh.... Night night Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-03 16:55:04

Lawd --- good bars...you had a well thought out verse. the DSR bar was smart.. wordplay was good, incorporated it well. your skatin party bar was a good concept but as a punch i don't believe to be too strong. I actually coincide that with hayden's fallin. It was a good concept, but same goes with it..Ray --- that paternity tested would have been a haymaker if it was better worded. Nonetheless it was cracky.. i was diggin the directness in your work. Junkie kickin rocks bar was ehhh, nothin much really... Wordplay was good, but playin a bit defensive there? Overall it was a good verse... Two different styles here, but i believe one came harder here. i'll drop two 8's here. stay up Voted: exwhyzee / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-04 03:59:45

Lawd: you had good lines here that cuold have potentially given you a higher rating from me. the set ups seemed somewhat relevant to your punches so that gets more points in my book... you stayed on track throught with a nice flow. wasnt really feeling the "haydens falling" line and the opener was worded awkwardly. it could have been better IMO. but the closer was nice i was feelin it. Ray: aight ray you had a good flow but the set ups werent there for me. you had some good concepts but your bars just didnt deliver like i was expecting them to. your set ups werent really relevant to your multis here and i was kinda dissapointed in this verse from you. ive seen a loooooot better. BUT im not saying it was a bad verse. like i said, you had a nice flow throughout. just feel like you didnt put forth the effort the closer was nice though. definitely the strongest part of your verse. fairs in. high-low Voted: exwhyzee / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-05 21:12:27

Sleep boy! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-05 23:40:13

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Posted on: 2013-10-06 13:44:16

LAWD: You had some really nice concepts in this verse. I really liked your opening play on his names, and then in relation to the sniper rifle. I thought you did a good job there. The other punches kept your verse consistent, although they were not as strong as your opener. I thought the Hayden line could have been worded a bit better though. But solid verse, and pretty consistent.. Just work on keeping everything strong like your first bar was... Nice job. Ray: Closer was dope. The rest seem more like slaps or par punches imo. It felt more like slap after slap after slap rather than build up and haymaker.. it was solid and consistent. You definitely had your quantity of punches in there, just have to work on boosting that quality up. I thoguht you opened up with a sick flow too, up to the lawyers cost bar it all just read off so smooth.. Overall this was a pretty good battle. I enjoyed reading both verses here but I thought one added a bit more to there punches because they were more directed towards there opponent. Nice job. Voted: exwhyzee / Ray Zeus
Posted on: 2013-10-06 15:29:36