At work ill get at these bars later or when i get home tonight Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-03 07:08:53

#PoLo Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-03 18:45:26

good battle. #yolo lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-03 21:39:14

gb. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-04 05:11:54

Fair battle. Hiatus --- you improvin chico. Your multies are well constructed and your verse flows well. It seems like you gettin the structure right as well (not that it matters too much) but deserves some credit. However you need to start workin on those punches. Right now you at the typical stage of callin him this and that. I suggest you come up with a concept that leads to a final punch and make sure they are inter-related. Epiff --- Eh. You did what hiatus couldn't do and attempted come up with a concept that led to what is meant to be a punch. A good example of that is your first bar and final bar. Although they are both unoriginal, it is good to see you on the right track homie. hiatus defeated you in the multi part but in terms of what wins battles, punches, your attempt to do so was stronger. That is what wins battles. Fair battle to both. My decision is in, stay up. I'll be lenient with the ratings and drop a 7-7. Voted: poseidon11 / DOZAA
Posted on: 2013-10-04 20:48:27

fv gb chiefs Voted: poseidon11 / DOZAA
Posted on: 2013-10-08 21:57:01