EXPO'S: run to the court/ rev run to the court... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-02 15:18:30

Go2Sleep!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-02 18:52:14

close battle, One mc landed more punches. Both had some good setups Voted: Ray Zeus / Indonesia
Posted on: 2013-10-03 00:18:25

nothin really impressive that pops out but consistency was there. just not that ummph Voted: Ray Zeus / Indonesia
Posted on: 2013-10-03 02:44:19

close battle, one edged with the punches being a little more creative. fair vote Voted: Ray Zeus / Indonesia
Posted on: 2013-10-04 00:10:55

Ray: Opening lines were not too strong on the punches IMO. A bit unoriginality in there, and the end rhyme 'head' was very iffy in that opening scheme too. I felt that messed the flow up for me a bit... Just about the same with the rest of the bars, I felt the concepts you brought to the battle were pretty generic, however, the closer I liked a little bit. On the plus side, you were consistently attacking your opponent throughout your bars, you just have to be more creative with your concepts and punches... Indonesia: The 'Flaws stand out', 'make him any money' and closing bar was cool. The rest I didn't feel were up to par with the previous lines I mentioned. The opener had a nice build up going to it, and the end punch really didn't do that justice there. I think you just need to do a better job keeping up on the higher end of punches.. This was actually a pretty closer battle to vote on for me.. But one did have a few punches that were a bit better than his opponents. Voted: Ray Zeus / Indonesia
Posted on: 2013-10-04 17:11:08

Could have been better...Ray --- your first bar was probably your best but then what happened after that..you fell off... Lame with a dope sail? It goes no where buddy. Your concepts were quite good but i felt that the build up was off. I've seen you come better. Indonesia --- not bad. I don't know how "Message" and "Decade" rhyme. Perhaps it is my accent. I can't make it out. Don't worry though, i'm not judgin anythin by that haha...Nonetheless i don't think you were are creative as Ray with the concepts, however the concepts you used were direct i.e. final bar was nice, direct and to the point. Beam on a pole was ehhh, put kids to sleep was ehh as well. Mid way you lost it to me. Not bad though... Overall someone executed there verse better and won this battle for me...stay up Voted: Ray Zeus / Indonesia
Posted on: 2013-10-04 20:37:49

Good Battle Voted: Ray Zeus / Indonesia
Posted on: 2013-10-05 01:55:07