sorry for the wait. wifi trippy these days. Homers are pigeons that are instructed to return home. The Simpson's Tapped Out is an app and when a task is completed, it'll show a thumb. off the top= from the start/ topless. Everything should be clear. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-01 21:40:42

& you need thumbs to grab anything. :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-01 21:42:23

Liberty 1 is one of the twin towers. Bin laden plotted it, lawd/lord in a trench, whole mass shootings/taking guns scheme. AOL's ''aim'' the chat room, you needed dial-up to use it. Rest you got, g'luck bud. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-01 21:44:15

nice "blind drop" lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-01 21:44:37

AC's Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-01 21:45:46

.. A blind drop is when we both write and post at the same time. I wasn't at my computer right away, my bad? Lmao.. I didn't flip anything you said so it's not like it wasn't blind. Relax Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-01 21:49:47

Lawd: first off i liked the simpsons reference because i have played 'tapped out' lol. the wording was a bit off and your flow was nice until the end you kinda went crazy with your filler. TBH you didn't have many punches just good concepts it was almost cypher worthy. Obey: you had a clean flow throughout and i liked your set ups.. its better when you can make the reader feel a punch coming ya know? and you did that here. had a decent attempt at nameplay but it was your weak spot here. good battle though. Fair is in. Voted: exwhyzee / Obey
Posted on: 2013-10-02 02:11:16

this my fair vote, both were simple, i felt ones wording in this was off, and the concepts werent as concrete as the others, i felt even tho it was simple, it was more effective here.... one needs to work on multi placement, the other needs to work on wording/diction.... cus the multis that were picked were forced in alot of areas..... fairest vote... pz Voted: exwhyzee / Obey
Posted on: 2013-10-03 03:09:06

Close battle.. Voted: exwhyzee / Obey
Posted on: 2013-10-03 11:32:50

nice Voted: exwhyzee / Obey
Posted on: 2013-10-03 13:16:14

LAWD: The simpsons concept was cool and original, but overall you definitely need to work on connecting your concepts better with your punches. I felt the opening bar took half of your verse to get to the end punch, which is a big no-no. Don't stretch it, make it compact, short, sweet and effective. It takes way too much out of the punch when you drag it on trying to make everything connect.. Make it smooth for the reader.. Obey: Opening bar was alright here, I wouldn't give it past par though.. I felt the wording wasn't too effective with it, but I liked the attempt.. The lawd out bar has pretty much the same expo as the opener, imo.. Closer was okay nothing too strong there too strong there either. You had a bunch of nice connections and plays on his name but I felt the execution on everyting lacked a little bit in this one. Stay up.. Votes in. Voted: exwhyzee / Obey
Posted on: 2013-10-04 16:39:19

gb fam. gotta get a rematch in fa sho Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-04 20:52:15