No ''a'' at the end of needa' there. My fault, rest you should get. Good luck piff. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-29 02:37:58

Piff: Punch was par to subpar, the concepts and idea's you brought for your punches were pretty basic and generic. But again like the last verse I read from you, your flow was pretty nice, and I like the writing style you have. Just have to step it up on the punches and concepts, which I mentioned in your last battle. Obey: Same thing as Piff, tbh w/ the concpets, you just glorified them a bit more with the wordplay. Well, with the exception of your closer, that bar was dope and best of the battle. I thought your opening bar, took a bit to get to the end punch, felt you could have shortened it up and made it a bit smoother. overall both of your guys verses were consistent, but just lacked the umph and/or dope concept in your punches. Votes in. Voted: DOZAA / Obey
Posted on: 2013-09-29 10:44:40

Piff, you make my dick hard Tyrone feels your love xx Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-29 12:27:35

both were a little basic here, need to work on better flows, and also more creativity, was close but one got it with the closer, pz Voted: DOZAA / Obey
Posted on: 2013-09-29 18:02:44