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Posted on: 2013-08-19 21:19:17

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Posted on: 2013-08-19 21:54:50

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Posted on: 2013-08-19 22:29:08

One started alright but then it went all downhill from there. The other started out strong the middle part of his drop was not so good wording was an issue imo, but he picked it up in the end. High to low. Vote's in. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-19 23:29:33

good battle y'all. my winner was consistent w/ his punches and his set ups were structured out nicely, only thing is that I feel like he has the potential to attack his opponent a lil more better. def some nice ish tho. while his opponent's wording was an issue here, i seen some better performances from him before. if he would of brought what he usually brings to the table and build it up all smoothly then this might of been a close 1. but his punches weren't causing much effect soo the chances of him takin the W were slim. fair's in. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-21 14:14:31

ok good shit to both battlers in another round. I take it this is round 2. Fidel Z, ur first half of the verse had a mixture of good concept, punches that were aiight but got potential to hit even harder, good and not so good flow. I like the opener to be more direct hitting, some simple multis and wording in the opening bar and the TLC set up. second half of ur verse had a better flow and consistency however I'm only feeling the closer punch but not the wordplay in it....... Lockard, u went for the personal approach, felt ur opener could've been shorten as it almost took up half ur verse, the concept was wasn't the best but the flow and rhyme was solid, next bar had a better flow to it, concept didn't do much for me though, also if u can cut down on the amount of "but" in it and replace with another word. at the moment it's "but but but", some more personal hits in the closer to end it off...... overall both verse had me confused with the choice of wording, to me both had original concept but didn't hit very hard. Winner had a better rhyme scheme and a more consistent flow. The other had more potential but the execution wasn't enough to secure the W. Fair vote. no hate at all. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-22 00:51:11