aiiigh, not the best of one here, X first opener bar looks good in format with big multies, but i honestly don't feel this was hard hitting from the relevancy, to rhyme to the concept. i see the same issue with ur closing bar, almost felt like u focus too much on large multies and lost flow in ur verse. ur last battle had better flow n concept than this tbh. Highlight line would be the hero name play but even this bar don't rhyme smoothly, WOULD FIRE THREW ME/ COULD TRY N MOVE? then GOOD PRIRATE MOVIES?..........Row , opener was aiiight but could do better in set up, next bar was kinda dope concept but word play on "Gogh" felt forced to me, but this was the highlight of the verse. last bar contains simple but better word play & metaphors but i don't really feel the punch............ove rall winner only took this on flow and slightly more complexity in his bars. definitely seen better from the other Emcee. Fair vote, no hate. respect to both. Voted: X-Calibur /
Posted on: 2013-08-13 19:58:20

yoooooooooooo, this shit here tho. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-16 03:01:06