Aiiight both didn't fill in the box so imma just gonna vote accordingly as equal lines with no points deductions....Kobe, u actually got some good concepts and I see 1 or two good punches in there, ur verse could be of potential tbh, I like to see u develop ur set up and structure ur bars do it hits harder... Highlight line was the "spit sick with mouth full of herpes" line........ Fidel, much better verse u put up than theist one I read, u have more directions and concept execution here... I like to see more of this typpa shit when battling stronger opponents, There's still room for elevation though like the opener for example, the end jab is solid, just need to make ur set up more effective and related to ur concept, think of calling him a Mexican or something and the set up, to relate to the chips/ nacho punch. Ur highlight line here would be the Houdini Line though u need to watch ur multies, u got two 7 syllables multies and a 6 syllable multi in there. Overall one had better structure n consistency, concepts are equal, flow are equal. Good battle. Fair vote. Voted: Liquid Wolf /
Posted on: 2013-08-03 18:31:51

Good battle, clear winner for me here. Voted: Liquid Wolf /
Posted on: 2013-08-03 21:01:29

FV Voted: Liquid Wolf /
Posted on: 2013-08-04 11:35:02

To my winner that last line got it for you the rest was alright To my loser i like how u structured it and i like your style he just took it by a hair GB both Voted: Liquid Wolf /
Posted on: 2013-08-06 17:10:59