my winner stayed consistent throughout his whole verse w/ some decent nameplays and OK setups. also his multi game is on point which helped his flow a lot. i def see a bunch of potential in em. while his opponent's wording was off + every punch he seemed to throw were either basic or barely caused any damage. that last bar made me laugh tho lol. keep workin on ya multies, u seemed to be havin some issues w/ em, like for example: "SPOT-NOT-CLEAN BOUGHT-THE-BEAN" the last part of it rhymed but the first part didn't so it that didn't work well there, u feel me? keep elevatin tho, good battle y'all, fair's in. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-02 03:12:16

o shit flogged is 1 syllable not 2 wtf LOL Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-02 03:43:01

i thought subreal's opener had a somewhat played concept + the broken multies so it was a miss. next line was just filler, the slot machine punch was ur best punch out of the whole 8, although the first multi in that line was forced. the closer just made no impact at all. u should read more battles & find out how to tighten up your multis more. fidel's opener was just filler, filler, filler and the final punch didn't hit that hard (play on sub, obvious). next line was just rhyming to me, barely made any damage. aaand again, closer wasn't that creative with the play on "real". u need to read battles & try to get the structure of ur punches right. anyway, my vote is in pals, this is quite close, went with the verse that had more hitting punches. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-02 10:54:39

This was a battle of idea/nice concepts vs flow/smoothness. My winner took this battle w/ nicer punches.....even though he had a choppier verse and some forced/broken multis he still had the better concepts and jabs thrown. The other even though he had a smoother verse w/ multis that matched better he didn't have really any punches I haven't heard and had next to no creativity. Fairs in high to low Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-03 11:21:06

one made almost no sense Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-03 16:52:26

one was just better all around Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-03 19:46:00

dope Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-03 20:51:39

One had better punches. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-04 00:19:46

Sub, your rhymes, multies, and schemes weren't that powerful. You have potential no doubt, but here a couple of your multies were chopped, and I think you tried to do too much with the punches at times as well. Fidel, your rhymes and multies were much cleaner and direct. Your punches were alright, but you need to think outside the box a little more. FV fellas. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-04 16:44:36

[K]ing shit... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-04 18:33:15

very clear winner Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 00:52:45

on the whole i thought this quite a poor quality battle. neither side really bought anything to the table. my winner made more of an attempt at punches but they were really quite terrible. he had some ok'ish ideas but really needed to spend more time on them to bring the best of it out. both sides had broken multis and wording issues. i think u both need concentrate on the basics i.e. developing a punch, matching multis and keep practicing Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 03:48:18