Good shit bruh, I'll get at this now.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-30 16:40:22

Kings baby! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-31 00:28:21

Ok contra .... That was just a verse of rhyming your build ups where pretty bad and irrelevant you went from president to ju jitsu to throwing semen in one bar make it all relevant and in the same topic your to flippant with your wording and concepts ... Also your Multies are hella forced and you seem to just be plucking rhyming words out the air and trying to make sense if them .... Also lacking on creativity on the punches in fact I'd only class your last line as a pun .... Snoopy ... I see you upping ta game recently your build ups are getting a lot better and staying on topic to the pun also your puns are getting better you just need to take the next step up and those and you'll be doing just fine I seen you in Moses school pay attention in class and you may actually make something of ya verses .... Clear winner for me here .... FVC .:X:. Voted: king of the smile / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-07-31 03:51:50

HoH.. ur not doin much attacking, jus rhyming tbh. ur not gonna win any battles doin that. u shud read somma ma battles to help u understand how to properly go at an enemy. Snoopy, ok verse... not too strong in terms of concepts but enuff to take this battle....against a much weaker opponent. even still ur CHAMPION bar was only one worth noting. Voted: king of the smile / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-07-31 08:27:43

decent battle, good ish fellas. anyways, my winner was overall better in each category. his punches were OK and his multies were decent. while his opponent seemed to have trouble throwing any punches which def hurt'd his chances of winnin. also his multies need some work, even tho by the looks of it.. the way he structures his bars, his flow can potentially be vicious and smoother. fair's in. Voted: king of the smile / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-07-31 12:34:55

This was a landslide here. One was just blatantly rhyming w/ no real punchlines....really need to add in punches in order to take out people. The other took this w/ consistency in his jabs but just needs to work on creativity. Fairs in low to high Voted: king of the smile / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-07-31 12:38:41

Snoopy just be killing shit! Lolz, yu is a sick ass nigga yu know that?! Voted: king of the smile / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-01 06:20:47

Winner had better punches Voted: king of the smile / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-01 21:31:12