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Length: 16 Lines

John Dos (22%)

Live Battler

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Jacksonville, Florida, United States

Manhattan is on FIRE! 30+ wins in a row!

Manhattan (78%) WINNER

Hall Of Famer
Grand Champion
Scheme Champion
Concept Champion
Tag Team Champion

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Legion of Doom

Reppin: Toronto, Ontario, Canada

John Dos

Homie you BORIN AS HELL YO, and tbh I'd rather rot to the CORE IN A CELL BRO than battle you but you just find it so IMPORTANT TO FAIL, SO...instead of let this GEEK ADVANCE i'mma show how i'm the 'PEOPLE'S CHAMP', "Rock" you wit sick punches than come across ya FOREHEAD WIT ELBOWS!! bitch I bet you still BUY PORN IN THE MAIL THOUGH. (LOL) an unFORTUNATE FELLOW who collects PORCELAINS, MEDALS..(fuckin loser) I'm a VERBAL ASSASIN, you a NERD WIT ATTRACTIONS to the DIRTIEST BLACK MEN..in wintertime you sip hot chocolate with FRIENDS IN SOME WOOL SWEATERS.  you ain't neva STEPPED IN A HOOD, EVA. check it ya'll this PUNK ISN'T DOPE, his bitch'll get FUCKED N THEN CHOKED, in the TRUNK?SHE'LL GET POKED. I'm PESCI FROM GOOD FELLAS. to me, SPITTIN IS SIMPLE.. You steady FORCIN SHIT, IT'S SAD. 'spend hella nights n MORNIN'S WITH YA PAD', you a BITCH ON THE MENSTRUAL. i'm SOARIN QUICK N FAST, ignore ya LITTLE RAPS, cuz i'm SURE THE SHIT IS TRASH. you never been on CORNAS GETTIN CASH. let me see ya car roll through my block i'll put ya FOREHEAD IN THE DASH, "push you n then shoot it" like JORDAN DID TO JAZZ!! My TEAM HYPE, we SQUEEZE PIPES my SQUAD KEEP MEAN BURNERS. Ya TEAM? HYPES, ya'll be like: "I GOT THESE CHEESEBURGERS."(menace to society)

Manhattan

You never had this rap-shit-down I'll smack-this-clown so is this GUY SMASHIN VETS? Nah you ain't NICE RAPPIN’ YET your TYPE ACTIN NEXT and my old name was Dr Manhattan so its ‘Doctor Over Dos’ like MIKE JACKSONS DEATH!!(Doctor,Overdose) Ya crew the Starz? I PROBLY SHOULD DROP THE LAMES the BODIES WOULD FLOP IN PAIN because the SHOTTY COULD POP YA BRAINS and see ‘Starz Laid Out: All Over The Sidewalk’ like its the HOLLYWOOD WALK OF FAME!!!(Its Over) No way this dumb-fuck-kid bust-slugs-quick or ya STEEL FLARES BLAST IT ALL cause the only time dude would ‘Roll Up Taking Shots w/ The Metal For Support’ is WHEELCHAIR BASKETBALL!!! You sent me this garbage 16 as If I'm STRESSING WACKNESS but you think your dope as fuck but I QUESTION THAT SHIT because you ‘Flop When Stepping In The Ring w/ Me’ and TESTING MAD HITS because your-lame-cuzzin w/ ‘More-Played-Punches' then WRESTLING MATCHES!!!! Your on some shady shit that makes HUGE MOBSTERS THINK  that you like to give a FEW TODDLERS WINKS because Your just known to "Creep On Children: Behind Closed Doors" no wonder your In the CREW MONSTARZ INK!!!!(Monsters Inc)   [Punchlines>Mults]

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Battle started: June 28^th 2013 at 23:19
Challenger joined: June 30^th 2013 at 11:22

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-06-30 11:22:10).

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The Law Basic Member	John Dos: Opener was mehh, the multi's seemed a bit forced with the Yo, bro, so.. all just to work with the elbow ending the punch. The punch fell flat also cause you weren't really dissing him just saying what your punches do more or less it was self glorification... th e "Stepped in a hood nad morning with a pad" lines were cool.. jordan line was okay and the closer had some humor in it.. Overall it flowed well and was smooth with the exception to your opening bar.. The Punch level consistancy was up and down... Manhattan: Opener was mehh for you also. Played and forced concept, the wording was mad messed up in the opener IMO... The crew punch was nice, good concept... Wheelchair basketball line was cool... Wrestling matches bar fell short, misworded/weak punch... Closer was nice, liked the concept, was original.. Overall: i did expect a bit more from both of you. One had a bit more consistancy because of his closer, other than that it was about equal. Voted: John Dos / Manhattan Posted on: 2013-06-30 13:14:58
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT Legend Concept Champion	bULLYS INC.. Comment Only Posted on: 2013-06-30 18:06:05
John Dos Live Battler	I feel like my puns mightve gone over heads. Nonetheless, very good battle here. Comment Only Posted on: 2013-06-30 23:51:46
Manhattan <LoD> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Cheea dope battle here Dos! Comment Only Posted on: 2013-07-01 11:56:29
StratOs Plan Basic Member	Both pretty dope Voted: John Dos / Manhattan Posted on: 2013-07-01 15:14:08
John Dos Live Battler	you can get that removed manhattan. neither deserve lower than a 7 real talk Comment Only Posted on: 2013-07-01 15:32:47
Manhattan <LoD> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	No worries dos we will let it ride....it made us hit the hot list even though the rates were low Comment Only Posted on: 2013-07-01 16:32:18
Aggo <AC's> One Bar Champion Tag Team Champion	ACs smash! Comment Only Posted on: 2013-07-01 18:14:03
Cryptology <LBP>	Had to read both again line by line. One started slow and picked up steam, the other was executed better Voted: John Dos / Manhattan Posted on: 2013-07-01 21:57:41
GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> Scheme Champion	punch-wise this wasn that close, wording and other key issues made this battle as close as it was.... loser jus slumped in tha middle, adn winner had shit execution that fuked up some dope ideas. THV Voted: John Dos / Manhattan Posted on: 2013-07-02 08:33:44
KING WAYNE <TPP> Basic Member	very good battle, could go either way, I liked ones closer a lil more tho fv inn Voted: John Dos / Manhattan Posted on: 2013-07-02 13:04:07
Letum <AC's>	Ace Ease Comment Only Posted on: 2013-07-02 13:48:51
Father Molly Basic Member	One started off soft and got hard. lol, had alright punches but was conceptually challenged, and it really brought the verse down... The other had good flow, and good punches, but nothing really outstanding, it seemed like everything was said in a joking matter but was irrelevent... fv is in. Voted: John Dos / Manhattan Posted on: 2013-07-03 08:15:56


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