Quick expo: .....1st bar ... Creed = Apollo creed .... Sly punches ... Sly = sylvester Stallone ... 2nd bar ..... simples rigghhtttt???? ....3rd bar... If you can't see the imagery on the punch your an idiot .... 4th bar ... Tor up as in tore up (ripped up) tor up also meaning he can't up his verse .... APOCALYPSE .... -1- Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-22 15:06:32

ToRoZ: Opener was alright, that could have been a bit better worded IMO... "X Stream flow" wordplay is forced.. 'when extreme flow its when' is not propper english, therefore, the only way that works for the read is when x streams flow.... The "D Cal" line had a potential to really be a crack ass line... I'd say keep the concept and try to word it a bit differently for later use... I notice your in chloro, have Eth work with you on the wording a bit.. Closer fell short in this case also... X-Cal: Opener fell short, the wordplay and concept seemed forced here IMO... "heart of a killer" line was cool.. I liked that... "Circle of fights" line was self glory... Closer was forced wordplay aslo.. 'To see tore up a verse" doesn't make sense in the english language lol... TBH after reading ToRoZ verse, I didn't think it was going to be this close.. Both had many ups and downs in this battle... I'm leaning this way.. Too tough to call Voted: X-Calibur /
Posted on: 2013-06-23 14:47:37

One started strong and was quick to fall flat with his execution. Very good concepts just didnt really follow through on them, the winner was more consistent and much less forced. Voted: X-Calibur /
Posted on: 2013-06-24 23:46:19

Not much to say here but both were pretty even and need to work on complexity and also relevance between their set-up and multie.. My choice got this with slightly better execution.. If there were a few less forced areas in ones verse he might of got my vote.. Voted: X-Calibur /
Posted on: 2013-06-26 19:01:08