Quick expo: BLUNT MAN got banned for biting last year and was awarded "hall of shame" for biting, but he claimed it was due to recycling his own verse many times. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-18 21:15:34

Expo: -he basically got his name from snoop dogg (first line) -Tha real Snoop Dogg reps the 213, the 316 is the area code for wichita kansas LOL -”always a pussy (cat), never a dogg even if he was SNOOP-I-FIED”- Snoop dogg’s new app puts himself and other snoop dog shit in pictures -Michael Jordan “shot basketballs” and “swung bats” “Im here to kill this pest LIKE IM ORKIN - Orkin is a pest/rodent killing company no body/nobody like an orphan VAN GOGH is a famous artist that sliced his ear off “My ‘dope script’ like its VICODIN”- vicodin is a pain killer, its basically like dope (if you ever did pills/heroin before you’d know) Charlie Brown was Snoopys owner in that show peanuts “dead joke” like a Chris farley clown, chris farley is a dead actor (funny fuckin dude) “he couldn’t win even if he was a “terminally sick kid witta wish”- terminally sick kids are often given wishes before they die (Make-A-Wish-Foundat ion) Cooter=Pussy *Ask or google for anymore explanations before voting, i know some of you foreign Emcees don’t know some of this shit* KEEP THA VOTES ‘100’ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-18 21:16:48

Damn...dope battle but i thought one edged it with a lil bit more creativity...FV no hate.. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-18 21:30:33

^^ thanks for the bar for bar breakdown. I will work on those areas u pointed out, peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-18 22:17:01

yoooooo, Blunt... you got a nice structure in terms of lettin punches flow, but your transitions are ass i.e LIKE THIS, LIKE THAT, LIKE LIKE LIKE... Stop w/ tha like word, find better ways for transfer ur concepts into tha punch. other than that, ur schemes were kinda basic and never really allowed u to shine also watch your multie count... alotta times ur were off or didn match them accordingly. Overall i think u need to start thinkin outside tha box alil more putting together ur drop, try to be more original tho, cause tho u have a lotta puns ur not bringin them off right and they lack any typa snap. Snoopy, ur on tha right track........ goin tha wrong way tho. ur wordplay is forced as fuck. Novack doesn sound like No back neither does Joker bitch sound like Djokovic. from there that stemed ur verse.. u had nothing but lame ass nameplay on celebrates and athletes. tha shit ain fresh at all, bad enough tha wp is fuked but u never added another angle to ur approach. you multies were more solid in comparison but there hardly rhymed thru-out tha whole bar w/o me stopping to make sure they were evenly matched. Best thign u had goin for u were tha concept plugs, but they were messed up by tha poor and forced punches. Overall i think u really need to stop acting like ukno this shit and really take tha time to learn tha fundamentals of Concept/Wordplay/Pun ch correlation then get back to tha box........ Ma winner here was able to maintain a better grasp on tha battle tho both need much work, this one had enuff pop to get ma nod. THV. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-18 22:39:06

I'll do something different and show yall how yall should word your bars... BLUNT MAN - Yall cant see dis MAN’S A FRAUD! witta ‘copied name’ DAMN ITS ODD! to even consider his FAM ARE GODS!, wit no true ‘support’ until he gets HAND A BRA!!....... Yall cant see this MAN IS A FRAUD witta copied name, DAMN THIS SHITS ODD to even consider his FAM'LY ARE GODS wit no one 'giving support' even if he was HANDED A BRA.. Your flow is dope, your concepts are used decently but played.. Your set-ups could be stronger and you could throw in another build up in your previous line that relates to being HANDED A BRA cuz it would make the hit stronger.. Hope you understand.. Most of your set-ups were relevant to part of your multie but need to be relevant to your whole multie............. Snoopy316 - he thinks he's god GIFTED, DUDE LOST-HIS-COOL, when i connect with my FIST IT WILL POP-THIS-FOOL, so Bluntman can cut the celebration cus the only time he'll feel "elevation" is when he's air LIFTED TO HOSPITAL.... he thinks hes GIFTED, DUDE LOST HIS COOL when i connect with my FIST IT'LL DROP THIS FOOL then the only time blunts 'elevation will be cared about' is when catches a LIFT TO THE HOSPITAL.. I'd say lose the inner rhymes unless they are both relevant to your multie and also if your gonna use inner rhymes try using more then 1 word.. Try using like 3.. Other then that your concepts were nice..Lay off the 1 word multies cuz i feel they are boring though and also try being a little more consistent with your creative lines like your opener... Ones flow was way better then his opponents but my choice got this for being slightly better in all other aspects.. Overall decent battle.. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 00:37:09

One was on point here Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 01:38:43

fairs in doeeee. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 04:04:51

fv guys this was dope as hell from both sides but one brought it harder, no hate Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 05:04:45

Both were dope as hell... This was really hard to choose but I chose the verse that seemed to hit a little bit harder.. I liked the personal jab's those were dope. Great job to both.. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 11:25:16

My winner here just had less errors pretty much. They lacked creativity and didn't have that many hard hitting punches but were jabbing all the time and the flow was nice. Really need to work on those concepts though most were mad played out. Other had more creativity but wayyy to much forced wp and that really effected there verse. It made there flow really choppy and made me have to skim over there whole verse a few times and that's not suppose to happen. Tbh I believe the loser could have taken this battle if it wasn't for the forced wp which really effected the smoothness of the verse. Fairs in Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 17:12:22

Yo keep it hot i aint gonna sway but this is a hella dope battle my winner brought more to the table noh8 send me beef bluntman homie that was some illish shiiiit Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 20:27:20

eth's right snoop homie that wordplay is what was the problem homie i really wasent feelin it hit me up with another battle coz i know you can bring some intelligent shiiiit... Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-19 20:31:38

.... Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-20 21:06:16

One flowed better. Grizz was on point with the use of like it's distracting and takes away from a good verse. Nice battle. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-20 22:39:45

Fv Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-21 03:50:49

fv vb gb tho Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-21 06:19:32

blunt, you compose your verse quite well, the structure is there and u jab a lot through out. there was a few issues with multi count and some wording probs but these can all be ironed out by taking more time writing and reading your veres out aloud to yourself. concept wise u were ok, but i think u have the ability to be a bit more creative with it so id like to see u step out the comfort zone out a bit. snoop - there was some pretty shocking wordplay going on here and it bought ur whole drop down. if it dont sound right then dont use it. u must have known that some of that stuff was awful and u think its bad then the voters will think its bad too. that aside, ur punches wernt too bad but i do think u need to concentrate on nailing the basics a bit more. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-21 06:47:26

^^^^ that was meant to be 6-5 Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-21 06:48:05

Good Battle! Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-21 09:22:07

One just had the better delivery better puns and better build ups here ... Was a good battle but clear winner for me going this way .... FV .:X:. Voted: The Dope Man / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-06-21 20:22:04

^^Respect to all who have voted and providing feedback. Blunt, looks like VP got the better of me. Close battle. Respect. Just Le me know if ur down for round 2. I send first this time. But it's ur call. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-21 22:30:43

mad tight battle, shoulda settled this beef a year ago with a battle like this. much respect to tha voters who actually gave an expo. And lets get a battle goin beginning of next month..im about to get on my snipin shit to close June out, i know you feel me haha but good shit tho homie, ~1~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-22 02:20:14

Yeah aiiight start of next month i got an eight for ya, my sniping season starts in August maybe mid July, so from now till then I'm just gonna try out some new shit in preparation and battle anybody who wanna get some personal beefing shit out. ain't even gonna care too much about record for now cus I know once my sniper rifle is loaded again it will boost it right back up. Ya I feel ya. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-22 02:49:55

No doubt homie, but im tryna get on my snipin game get myself in the 100s.. but lets battle start of next month.. i need some time to think about punches verse you anyways haha put some work in that 16 Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-22 03:07:23

T[K0]... [K]ingz Shit Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-23 03:17:20