Quick expo -- KP is a brand of sauce kingship punch is obvious hopefully ... Nice lil battle KING ... Got me key styling whilst the wifey does the food shop pahahaha Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 14:52:56

King: Opener lines there was a couple of slaps and no real punch. The "Timex" wordplay could have been worded much better, the way it was written the connection wasn't really strong.. But there wasn't any real build up into a nice punch in there.. The 'gloryhole' concept was cool but again, you need to word and set that punch up better. and the lines to the finish after that are about the same as your opening lines.... X: Opening lines worked, flowed well and punched... The "director" line could have been worded a bit better, I didn't feel the punch as much as I did the concept... The closer was cool, but just another average nameplay on him like the opener was.. nothing real strong with you punches here but they were consistant.. Votes in. Voted: KING POSEIDON / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-06-14 18:42:06

Both were ok.. I felt my choice was a bit more consistent here and had stronger execution but both were somewhat evenly matched in other aspects.. But one needs to work on his structure and execution.. Nothing hard hitting form either though but a little bit of wittiness from both.. Overall ok spar.. Voted: KING POSEIDON / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-06-14 19:20:26

I felt my winner brought a more creative approach to the table and was more consistent w/ landing the punches. Both were pretty smooth though. Other had a couple of dope lines but wasn't as consistent and the structure of there verse was sort of choppy. Fairs in low to low Voted: KING POSEIDON / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-06-14 20:16:28

I hate dick jokes in battle rap. Scheme was average. Nothing landed that really sparked my interest. X's verse could have been better. Still gets the win due to creativity Voted: KING POSEIDON / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-06-14 21:33:17

King- ur gettin alil better famzo, U still need to tighten some shit up.. lik ein your opener.. u said TIMEX but didn translate it into an actual punch. other than.. ur structure isn potential enough to allow heavy puns. ur not letting ur bars flow up to a point, and tha 1'2 style only works if ur 1) stayin relevant in concepts 2) punching or jabbin in tha two lines... not jus rhyming yo. get vicious!!!! X-- not much tro say tbh... ur not gettin worse , and ur certainly not gettin any better by snipin these noobs, but wen u get into tha field forreal, i'll throw u some breaks on tha expos. THV Voted: KING POSEIDON / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-06-16 10:30:17

fv Voted: KING POSEIDON / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-06-16 12:27:18