FOR Row ONLY, NO BODY TAKE THIS........ Quick Expo: Word flips: "Hard-beat/Heart-bea t", "egg"/ovary, "duck", "flow", "wave".............. .......... deliberator = to think carefully or attentively... defibrillator = An electrical device used to counteract fibrillation of the heart muscle and restore normal heartbeat by applying a brief electric shock....When the ovary (egg) in a girl breaks = monthly period cycle. R o w should know all about it because he has a pussy and chucks monthly PMS tantrums haha Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-13 20:42:57

MURDA Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-13 21:23:07

caught em wit a haymaker Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-13 22:25:23

vote stands, but sway comments deleted upon request Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 03:32:10

Type rain coat, G'lookz yungun. MURDER 1/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 07:11:36

Alright let me break it down like this for you guys. Snoopy- You had some decent ideas but nothing was really hitting that hard and I'll say this a million times but when you have inner multis that are not a part of your set up then there is no need to 'put this in' it just confuses the reader and makes them think both set ups relate to the punch....which they don't in your case so just-put-this-then. Your first bar didn't really hit hard to me as It's fairly played out and I've heard it before and the start beef part doesn't relate to the hard beat punch so no need for quotations. Next bar was too weak for me dude I get the break an egg part but it doesn't work both ways as a punchline unless your just saying he couldn't break something that's easy to break which would be extremely weak imo. Next bar you used 'Duck' in both set ups but for what reason? it didn't even relate and wbat does ducking this gun have to do w/ coming on his moms breast? Anything about moms is usually pretty played too so I really was not feeling that tbh. Last line was actually your best but it was pure self hype so It didn't have an impact on your opponent. You really need to up your creativity here and make sure your punches land hard every time. Row- The hispanic wp had been used quite a lot and other then that the wordplay was alright the punch didn't connect to well for me but it was alright. Next bar once again it seems like your aiming for just wordplay but aren't using it to set up a creative punch. However it was fairly decent and at least hit. Next bar was probably your best I liked the ben affleck wp I've never seen it before so I give points for creativity but I'm getting tired of saying that the concept itself was not very strong. Final bar you got a little personal here and I dig that however the wp was alright but the concept was not at all it was actually fairly weak. Major points for keeping your scheme the entire time though. Overall one took this battle convincingly w/ harder hitting lines and a smoother read. Both should up the creativity though. Fairs in low to low Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-14 16:15:31

MUrda Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 17:54:04

Been looking forward to this. I must say I am EXTREMELY disappointed with your drop snoopy. I was expecting MUCH better. You had a few jabs here and there but nothing really serious despite how heated this beef had become between you two. Keep at it though I expect a rematch. Row was on point he kept the same scheme throughout but he broke a multi or two. afFORDING SPAIN TRIPS. Just because you dont caps part of a word it doesnt remove syllable value. Remember that row. Row's punches were consistant with good metaphor and wordplay usage. THe kind of punches I had expected in a week long boiling beef. Fair's in Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-14 21:37:41

Really good spar and read here. Snoop you had some decent content in here. I felt you coulda carried the concepts much further, some of te punches and their execution could've been altered and worded a bit differently to hit harder, but still best I've seen from you in a while. Row- good shit all around, never really disappoints, good flow and concepts. Overall my winner took this with a much smoother read and concise use of concepts. Fair's in. Keep up the good work. Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-15 00:30:56

This was really close for me.. But rhyme schemes won it for me. Good battle.. Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-15 09:38:48

consistency n better punches got my vote, nice drop from both tho fv inn Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-15 14:24:22

his panic on spain trips. lol Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-15 21:39:13

Decent. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-16 00:32:40

send beef row Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-16 03:15:50

2-2 vote deleted Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-16 09:43:32

Good battle Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-06-16 12:42:26