THIS IS FOR THA CREW BATTLE...... GL MA DUDE. holla Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-12 12:04:24

Monster Shit, MIC Checc -1. #2Pacalypse Now. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-15 16:21:09

APPCALYPSE !!!! Time to wrap this crew battle up ..... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-15 19:04:49

HVK Came hard as fuck Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-17 11:00:11

HVK: opener was okay.. Average punch and concept there.. 'dick movements are puzzling" line was nice... Liked the connections there.. the "hypnosis line was cool"... "mirror maze" line was nice also.. Rest of the verse was a lot of filler and average slaps.. Felt you started off alot cleaner than you finished with.. Also OD'd on the nameplay a bit.. UhMAZING: Simiplistic rhyme schemes with choppy ass flow.. All the spelling wordplay in the opening lines kinda fell short.. basically pick up your complexity a bit and bring some better concepts to the table.. Votes in. Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-17 11:15:37

All "Puzzle" "Maze" "In a maze" lines are ancient and have been used on me like 3 years ago. Just saying. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-17 16:23:07

Hvk is a nice dude, and a good battler...but I didn't make much since of this verse he posted. but it's all in fun anyways, crew battle is over. GB my dude. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-17 16:24:07

ones verse was very irritating. way tooooo much petty picking goin on... not enuff kill. other did pretty alright, lil off form. but hey, is what it is. THV. Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 01:39:00

HVK, first bar dragged on a little but the punch was good. second bar was aiight with that puzzle/ maze punch nothing too hard. alot of name play throughout the verse. nice various rhyme scheme and flow quite smoothly. the closer was pretty cool but not a hard punch.......UhMAZING , first two bars was funny as fuck and personal, credit for responding to his verse, though the rhyme and concept is not complex it's still worth a giggle. not sure why u mention Ayo Re-Up when he's not in the battle nor is he in the APOC crew. don't like the REALITY/ GRAVITY rhyme cus it sounds eminem. ur ending wasn't ur best. Overall one took this with better concepts, flow and complexity. Fair Vote. Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 02:15:58

Winner here had a bit more polished all around verse..better use of multis ..and concepts..although pretty played personals imo.. loser had some decent disses. But needs to work on more creative scheme and wordplay rather than run of the mill straight disses.. fairs in Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 04:01:24

my winner had an all round better verse, but the other still came hard as fuck Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 04:24:26

hvk - decent enough drop although, like others have said, i thought there were some pretty played lines around the whole 'maze' thing, i think u cud have been a bit more original on that front. threw a lot of punches which were good, nothing that stood out too much but they were enough to do damage. Maze - that spelling thing u tried didnt work to be honest, it went on for far too long and didnt really acheive anythin at the end of it. ur punch quality picked up slightly after that, although it was all very simple. id say u need to work on ur wording to make everythin smoother and construct ur bars more effecticely. ur punches arnt bad, they just need to be built up better. fairs in Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 06:37:57

appreciate all the feedbacc, but in all honesty I wasn't trying to win this battle..I'm just trying to get this crew battle over with. If I wanted to win, knowing full well I'm going against HVK, I would of brought better punches and a bigger vocab. That's why it seems "Basic" it is what it is. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-18 12:48:48

One sided battle.. Great concepts - Talking about someones mom is old unless there is creativity involved with it but the concept is very juvenile so try speaking on things that are going on in the news or with celebrities or evening talk about a volcano but make sure you convert it into a punchline and attack the hell out of your opponent.. theres so much to rap about and saying someones mom is fat or a hoe is very basic... Metaphors - I love metaphors.. They help with complexity if you word your shit right... The fresher the metaphor then usually the stronger your punch will be... Heres the definition of a metaphor..A figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable... Use them wisely and it'll help you with creativity... Punchlines - Punches should always be executed strongly and in order to do so you want some strong set-ups with good concepts... Heres a bar of mine i used in the past...'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK"... Everything inside of the ' ' has to do with class and oral favors lol so those are set-ups for my punch which is inside the " " and the use of understanding was used as wordplay cuz under standing dick means under an erect dick and understanding dick means she understands it... You wanna provide punch after punch after punch and humiliate your opponent....Set-ups - These are very important because they make the punch stronger... I showed you an example of what a set-up is when i was explaning the importance of punchlines... Always make sure your set-up has relevance to your multie/punch or else it will be seen as just filler... Your set-up leaves the reader wanting more and be sure to make your set-ups stand out by putting something around them such as ' ' or " " or ` ` will work just fine so that the reader knows exactly what your talking about... Do not decorate your verse either with different types of symbols like ~ or // or anything of that matter... Multies - Be sure to always provide multies that are at least 3-6 syllables cuz multies help with the flow and punch and if you dont know what a multie is then its the words that rhymes with each other when your going from line to line.. And always make sure the syllable count is exact and dont force your multies which means make sure there relevant... Take this for example again.... 'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK".... The words that are capitalized are my multies... So the words that are capped in my 1st line rhyme with the words that are capped in my 2nd which makes them multies... Always cap your multies and also always fill in your box like i do... Also spell shit right so its an easier read... If you need anymore help or dont understand anything then pm and I'll break it down even more.. You can also check out some vets to see how to structure your verse... Try being as creative as possible... Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 15:01:57

mad close my opinion HVK came with more Voted: HVK / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2013-06-18 16:51:28

Who gives a fucc what lines you used in Your Battles. smh, story tellin' mah fucca. lol. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-18 18:18:46