Killed'em.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-04 23:02:14

One just need to work on relevance and complexity, my winner had an overall better verse IMO ... no h8 vb Voted: -Knowledge- / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-06-04 23:19:22

one great big ball of fuck Voted: -Knowledge- / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-06-05 00:36:35

First Off..... Expo .. ---------------- -------------- -Kno wledge- ----------- ------------------- ..do one motha fucking LAME REFERENCE... We gone see ' Blood Drawn ' like GAME SKETCHIN (lmao) ------------ -------------------- What does this line even mean?LAME REFERENCE.GAME SKETCHIN Have no meaning together.Forget punch,there isn't even a concept here. ------------- -------------------- u beef? my ' battle rounds ' make you SEE like an EYE DOCTOR, it's easy to see, like 3D, I put ' Words in BLUE and RED ' like PRICE CHOPPER/ ---------- -------------------- ---- You stretched it w/ your multis, I myself used this concept of blue/red lots of times, they become shit if you stretch 'em bro.Loses the punch effect. ----------- -------------------- ----- If it's problems, I will EXPOSE YA... I'll Lift the CANNON like MARIAH ON MY SHOULDERS(lmao) --- -------------------- -------------- Your e trying too hard, the multis are off, and they d not connect whatsoever so.I get the cannon/mariah reference, but they couldve been more shorter and stingier.Feel Me? --------------- -------------------- ------- I'll catch u tryna ' lay up ' or in the lab , right before the HOOK DROP.. You'll get ' COURT '(caught) in the lab 'BANGING', That's A ' HOOK SHOT '.. --------------- -------------------- -------- Of court/caught is not a wordplay at all.This makes it forced, and thus once again loses it punch effect.Stop forcing, keep your lines short, and you'll be good to go.You have potential. -------- -------------------- ---------------- Gr izzy -------------- -------------------- ------ nice try but he cant FLOW W/ GREAT'S TEXT/ hook, jab, then ill THROW A STRATE NEXT that'll leave 'Knows workin off-site' like 'Blind-FOLDED TASTE TEST! ------------- -------------------- -------- Nice bar,but couldve been more precise or relevant.Nice jab there. ------------ -------------------- --------- lolz, now im FINNA GO HARD and prove boi cud never get a TEN ON SCORE CARDS and sum1 does find a 'Dime-n-Know' then they vp shud be 'IN A BONE-YARD'! ------- -------------------- ---------------- OK a good concept,nice playing with his VP, but you couldve kept it short, it wouldve flowed better.If you get what I mean.Good. -------- -------------------- --------------- pfft i'll 'walk across ledge' w/ tha STRATEST BALANCE and 'Bring him down as a result' like a WEIGHTED CHALLENGE! shit, this battles in tha name... have 'Knowledge of tha GREAT ADVANTAGE' thats 'Rolling all over his flo' w/o 'Practicing SKATE MACHANICS' -------- -------------------- ------------ Ok, good punch, nice flips, but I can't help but ask you, why did you not use the assassins creed-ish concept in that bar, the opener suggested so.. -------------- -------------------- -------- Overall One won this w/ better bars and executuon.The loser came off forced and failed to make sometimes.Loser has potential,keep working at your art. Ex.. Voted: -Knowledge- / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-06-05 02:12:53

see blood drawn(drawing) like game sketchin lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-05 06:29:16

murda..bish! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-05 11:07:33

fairs in, felt one edged with conceptual consistency as well as connection/set up relevance as well, gb keep banging Voted: -Knowledge- / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2013-06-06 22:49:43