one wasn't extraordinary but won with a thorough opener, and a couple decent concepts and punches, my loser here was a little simplistic, with some older concepts, freshen it up a little and bring a more creative aspect to it, but you got the jist so just elevate, fairs in Voted: KING WAYNE /
Posted on: 2013-06-04 11:56:18

gud shit. Voted: KING WAYNE /
Posted on: 2013-06-05 14:30:34

I quite enjoyed this battle. Tyler, i remember voting one of ur other battles and i told u that u were focusin on schemin too much and not addressin the punch aspect, im glad to see u took that advice on board because u combined the two quite successfully here. ur flow was nice, aggressive. u lost steam about 3/4 in but it is a 16 and it happens. i would say maybe work on ur concepts a bit more, ur good enough to get a bit more complex than this and throw in some wordplay too. king, i thought u were equally as agressive and and smooth. concepts were there but a tad played and a couple lines were just ... ramdom ... e.g. that geese line. u held ur multi count nice and punch wise u were as good as tyler. this is a really tough 1 to call but as a whole i think 1 was slightly more developed and came that lil bit stronger. but u both put on a good show and id like to see a round 2 Voted: KING WAYNE /
Posted on: 2013-06-07 06:25:52

I know i can't vote at this point, but this was a decent spar nonetheless. Tyler- You had some good lines that held some solid potential but again I think you let scheming hinder you from developing your concepts a bit more. You've done better at utilizing more concepts and making them more potent, however you should work on more relevant setups to take you punches out of the 'strong jab' range. Good shit though, Like that rick james line and tha edgar allen line were really good, but again better use of setups would've been ultimately better. Wayne- You have a decent foundation however some of you rrhymes are forced and some of your concepts are really played or just very weak. You had alot of generic lines and then the ones that you stepped out of your comfort zone to spit didn't come off as they should've. Work on making a more smoothe execution with better wording and making a stronger impact with more comlexity. Good stuff here though. Keep it up Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-07 09:15:27