Aight since ya both pretty basic, I'ma break this down for yall. This is all solely MY opinion. ||Intro:|| Rob clearly has a better grasp on battle structure, but mike, you are starting to slowly get the grasp of things. ||Opener A:|| Un normal contact is pretty forced. Fatality/Mortal Kombat punches are extremely played out. But it landed.||Midverse A:||Open Hands/Several Moves/Wrestle Dudes/Choke & Slams is a decent scheme, but the concept is played. Its a punch tho. Rest seemed pretty stretched. ||Closer A:|| Concept had potential but ended up pretty weak. ||Opener B:|| Still kind of all over the place, mike. Try and rhyme more than one syllable and these bars structured so theyre more readable and understandable. ||Midverse B:|| You had some decent attempts at interesting rhyme schemes in here, but its still too messy to be considered acceptable. Keep workin on your structure, bud. ||Closer B:|| Again, you had a decent concept started, but then fall off with something thats hard to grasp. ||Conclusion:|| The better verse was definitely more consistant here, and shows some pretty good potential. The losing battler is showing progress and just needs to continue practicing. Respect to both of you. Keep elevatin! --- Always Honest & Fair. Please vote back Honest & Fair. -Preme Voted: READY_ROB / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2013-05-26 04:30:26

honestly mikestunner trow some dope lines he deserves the trophy Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-27 07:08:54

Auto win awarded to ready rob mikestunner was caught asking for votes Voted: READY_ROB / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2013-05-27 13:41:40

mahn i told him to check out my battle.not vote me .how dumb is that Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-28 02:14:43

Good lookin phonocide you kept it 100 now lets see if i can put these bars to the test ..... You wana battle ill send 8 first Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-28 19:17:39