Mother fuckin AC's for life! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-22 18:01:49

Expo: Underbite makes your jaw drop lower then usual....Jimmy From southpark has ms and walks around w/ two metal crutches to help himself walk around. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-22 18:03:36

G'luck Jimmy Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-22 18:03:50

Ight lets look at this scalpel ... Forceps ... Im going in .... JIMMY DEAN ... BAR1 ... Ok ma dude its obvious you aren't grasping multies in this thing .... As your first bar the multies dont match your just rhyming the last words in the multies nothing else rhymes being in a crew like regs id have thought they would have taught you the basics this bar is a 4/10 ... Bar2 ... Hmmmm no real punch flow was better multies slightly better 5/10 ... Bar3 .... Nope nothing here but filler 4/10 ... Bar4 ... Weak punch poor set up ... Ight jimmy d your in a crew with some dope spittahs i suggest you make a thread in ya crew forum asking for help post this in there and get ya crew to peep and help you elevate .... Dr manhattan ... Bar1 ... Game over first bar won it already 7/10 good ,ultis good metaphors ... Bar2 ...good shit again solid bar and personal too 8/10 ... Bar3 ... Hahaha liked that concept too killer finisher 8/10 .... Clearly out muscled here ... FV .:X:. Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-22 19:10:40

fv Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-23 02:29:27

ACs making this look easy Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-23 16:56:27

first i wanna say , solomon strongest guy?? i think u mean sampson, solomon was the smartest-but i appreciate that conceptually, ill take that over guns and ho's any day...ones scheme was all over the place, and i personally think these should be written in a way that it would sound good as a rap..and one just didn't have the structure-the other i really enjoyed the verse..nice meta's, personal punches, a few basic multi's but it doesn't have to be overly complex to be good...u read the winners as a rap and it rides..so FV Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-23 23:43:16

Fv Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-24 10:51:37

1-1 vote deleted Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-24 16:00:44

JD - The ROTY, Opener was had a god concept behind it but the rhyming and punch didn't hit for me also you had a decent structure, the 2nd bar was again had some issue with the rhyming and the concept again was there just the execution and wording could have been better. The closer continued with the same problem as well and even your structure was getting messy. Overall: A very disappointing drop, i was expecting a lot from you since this is the first battle i've seen from you. Rhymin had issues, Punches lacked power, Setups were decent, Structure was quite messy, Vocab was good. [Stand Out Line: Opener] DR - A very crisp opener, a tiny bit stretched for me but the it well paid off with a slick punch, well worded set up and a nice structure. The rest actually was very consistent, the closer was nice and the punches kept coming, you basically took it and ran with it, this is proberly one of your best drops i've seen from you. [Stand Out Lines: Opener & Clpser] Fairs In. Mid to Low. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-24 23:13:05

my fv is in it was a heated battle,but I got to pick a winner Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-25 00:21:03

winner here due to non-stretched scheme. both consisent of decent of wordplay/personal and multies. highs and lows. Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-25 03:06:29

damn, my high selected the wrong dude.. mods if u see this switch or......not. too stoned to care atm Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-25 03:08:11

Jimmy: i got men w/ reVOLVERS-N-ROUNDS that WALK-UP-N-DOWN a PART-OF-THE-TOWN where DOC-IS-AROUND- He'll be "next TO strong DUDES" like 'SOLOMON's SPOUSE once they OPEN HIS HOUSE. // --- Decent multies, but lots of filler. Concept is a bit played and doesn't hit very hard. --- They'll bring'em to da 'HARBOR, throw 'DOC: IN THE WATER' n start 'HOLDING HIM DOWN'- to scare 'OR FINISH' him off like they 'FOSTERED-THIS-CLOWN my TOOLIES-is-NEAR da BULLETS-n-FLARES that'll 'DASH: IN-THE-AIR' like APOSTROPHE'S NOW- --- Some forced rhymes here, but the concept is a little better. Punch is a bit played, but it landed. --- y'all need to MESSAGE ME HOW dis little chump, stupid punk slash LETSBEEF FIEND got in the FVC?!...thts some queer stuff I shoul NEVER SEE, like a close game tween da NETS N HEAT/ --- Nah.. too basic and played. Not feelin' this too much. --- DR MAN: Apostrophe line= Pure self hype so I’ll never think REALLY? SON SOUNDS HARD so you wouldn’t ‘Walk around w/ 2 pieces for support’ to let SHITTY GUNS LOUD SPARK because you couldn’t “Hold ya own weight w/ the metal” if you were JIMMY FROM SOUTHPARK!!!! --- Hard hittin punch, but "shitty guns loud spark" is mad forced. --- When you were in AC’s no one gave a fuck and it made YOU WONDER RIGHT? It’s because you wouldn’t have a ‘Jaw dropping style’ w/ a HUGE UNDER BITE so you were just “Starving For Attention” like GROUP HUNGER STRIKES!!! --- Nice punch. Good multies and smooth flow. --- This WACK ASS WRITER just pms for votes on the reg so I’ll TRASH THAT SNIPER because dudes been ‘Driving People Crazy for Fairs’ like MAD CAB DRIVERS!!!! --- De cent punch. Setup was a little basic, but it worked. --- Overall: One was more consistant, had a smoother flow and it resulted in their punches landing harder. Props to both of you on a pretty dope battle. Always Fair, Preme Voted: Manhattan /
Posted on: 2013-05-25 07:32:34

I said good day. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-25 17:57:09