Pretty obvious winner here. Loser really only scratched the surface of his concepts and didn't utilize them to their potential. There was alot of poor wording and stretched wordplay that really degraded the quality of your bars on top of forced rhymes and some really off concepts in general. The loser just lacked consistency overall and his lack of valid setups were a contributing factor to the reason his punches didn't land hard or land at all. The winner had a few good jabs in there, you kind of deviated from your rhyme scheme a few times but it was still natural and consistent, just make sure your syllable count is consistent. Alot of your punches would've been better, had you used a little more wordplay to embellish your punches through the use of relevant setups. Overall, my winner had better concepts with a cleaner execution and delivery topped off with consistency. Fairs in. Keep elevating. Keepin a HUNNID. Generous rates for a 16. Voted: The Law /
Posted on: 2013-05-17 08:35:59

one needs to view some veterans battles on this site, or ask for help because he seems to be hitting a brick wall. I can see the potential there but is stuck in that .//''::; tar...the other came correct as usual and had a body bag line riight in that opener that was PHEW..keep it up fellas...GONZO VOTE// Voted: The Law /
Posted on: 2013-05-19 16:16:43