Goodluck Phe, hot battle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 11:54:59

Oh, Big bang theory created space.. hence craving space, dk if anyone would've caught that. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 11:56:44

Lets agree now that EVERY vote that has a weak ass expo gets deleted bro.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 11:59:05

Good luck to you as well.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 11:59:56

^ Agreed 100%.. Tired of the FV NO H8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 12:06:24

FV VB AC'S NO H8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 12:13:08

Pheonom-your verse was worded fairly well not really drawn out minimal filler and pretty well executed..had a few nice lines in the mix obey-that whyte out line could have been a haymaker if worded and executed properly..I feel you rushed the end of your verse you had some OK lines but the way that whyte out line was worded really took away from your verse IMO... Overall this was a decent read but my winner is clear Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-12 14:24:15

Ok let's take a look at this here .... Phe ... Bar1 .... Heard the chiropractor concept before but you have put a ight twist on it nothing wow build up was coo 7/10 ... Bar2 ...liked the concept but i think i read someone somewhere mention about 'these huge relating smilie/metaphor comparisons' build ups takes away from the flow and the punch for me 7/10 ... Bar3 .... This dont work for as strong as it should i like the punch but dead beats doesn't deliver the desired effect for me you could of flipped that to something else and the multis in this bar wasnt enough to carry a flow 6/10 .... Bar4 .... Again conceptually dope but drawn out to long .... Leave you on e smite you with light raps where's the correlation in this .... I get the empty on e to do with the end punch but multi in the middle seemed pointless to me 6.5/10 ..... Obey .... Bar1 ... Hmmm multis where not good for me da fuck is spring suite sickly all about phe lyin was a nice nameplay but could of been used better poor first bar for me wasnt feeling it from a flow point from an execution point and the multis weren't working for me 5/10 .... Bar2 .... Thought the drop Whyte out again could of been used so much better than that wasnt feeling it flow was better and multis better in this bar than your opener but not banging 6/10 ... Meh very vague refernce to Russian roulette wouldnt have caught this if ya hadnt put the brackets in thus making it vague and for me making it a poor bar with a week punch at the end with the waiter shit 5/10 .... Double multi bars just don't cut it flow is there not is the build up for me poor closer weak punch nothing hitting for me concept again vague not being delivered correctly .... 6/10 ..... Ight quite clear the winner for me here how ever both have areas to improve on phe watch those long build up comparisons as you lose the flow in the bar and obey you need to watch ya multi and maybe simplify your punches i think your trying for to much complexity which gets the reader lost and then it doesn't connect .... My opinions anyway .. FV .:X:. Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-12 14:39:01

A DECENT READ, FELT ONE DEFINATELY WORDED THEIR SHIT MORE SMOOTHER FROM TOP TO BOTTOM, ALSO FELT A WORDPLAY USED BY ON WOZ A LIL OFF, IN A CLOSEish CONTEST ELEMENTS LIKE THAT CAN DECIDE A BATTLE......MY FAIR IS IN....GL TO BOTH...holla Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-12 14:47:19

What's a battle without an X vote, thanks for the detailed votes guys. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 17:45:22

we do this...fuk around, get famous. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-12 18:12:12

Came down to the way shit was worded. No other expo needed. Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-13 16:27:04

Say the word Obey.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-14 07:24:45

Nice spar here. Felt one was more aggressive all-around. Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-14 20:30:49

One had better concepts but stretched bars the other came with mediocre wordplay but was more consistent n flowed better... fv both dope Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-14 22:52:24

Fv Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-15 01:23:21

Hah i accidentally pasted my other shit. Awel. Voted: Apollyon / Obey
Posted on: 2013-05-15 07:13:14