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Posted on: 2013-05-07 15:26:22

Lady, you had some good concepts for punches, but just didn't execute. Multi's were also very weak and almost non-existent. Keep working on it, for a femcee, you have potential..... Snoopy, this is the best drop of yours I've read thus far. Punches were setup well, you had good structure between your flow and multi's. Props. Honest in. ~Respect. Voted: Venomoussss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 18:02:47

fairs in Voted: Venomoussss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 18:45:56

gb Voted: Venomoussss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 20:14:51

GO2SLEEP. Lol mmm weird battle. Expected better from both. LV-Your concepts weren't completely developed and the execution was severely lacking. You also need to up your rhyme scheme in general because that 2 sylllable rhyme scheme won't cut it. Snoop- You had somewhat more relevance within your bars but not by much. Your concepts were a little played at times and your verse really was based more on the multi scheme. Working on making less blatant and obvious comparison and utilizing more wordplay and conceptual schemes that are then embellished with rhyme schemes (goes for both of you) Overall, the winner here just showed a tad bit more conceptuality. Both need to step it up though. Keep elevatin. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-07 21:07:09

LADYVE - Ladies First i Guess. The opener was poorly structured but the concept was there. You have a decent rhyme scheme but cmon VE you need to step up with your Multis game and aim between 3-5 and keep an eye out on syllables. You had some very good concepts in there no doubt and even one possible heavy punch imo but the structure and execution really drained the power from it. The punches are there just the execution really dragged you down. Just step up your Multi game, develop your structure and word your set ups better leading to better execution and you could damage around here. Got some serious potential here just a bit undeveloped also need to polish some areas. [Stand Out Line: 7th Line]. SNOOPY - Snoopin Around I See. Opener seemed you have something good coming but the filler ruined it for me and the punch didn't really hit for me. The multis here were mostly on point but i felt your punches were played throughout. You could do with better complexity in your concepts. Wordplay could definitely bring more spice to your drop. You need to bring much more fresher ideas to the table. A clean drop but the concepts were very dull and played. [Stand Out Line: The C;osing Line] A tough one, one had better concepts the other had a cleaner verse. One had basic rhymes the other had played out concepts. So my vote is goung tot he one who had more potential to have a more heavy drop. Mid-Low to Low. Fairs In. APOC: Scream On'em. Voted: Venomoussss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-08 06:35:01

Voting hustle .... Doing this on my lunch at work .... Lets look at these verses ... Lady venom ... You got some real nice concepts in your verse but your just not exciting or utilising multis enough in your verse for me the way ya put ya lyrics together is nice but you could be so much better are those fuckers in go2sleep actually doing anything to help you elevate??? .... Snoopy .... First bar was funny as fuck .... Had me rolling liked that shit .... Played down the rest of the bars in terms of complexity but punches where still their .... Lady you could beat snoopy if you upped ya multies and reworded some of ya concepts .... FV IS IN .... Voted: Venomoussss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-09 07:21:11

I admit i certainly need work, I havn't battled for long, I usually just make tracks about life etc, so battling isn't easy for me lol. I think most of the time people don't actually understand my punchlines so they think... 'that doesn't make sence' but i'm not changing my style because that's just how i do win or lose. I need 2 improve definately, practise makes perfect, Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-09 07:31:44

yeah respect Lady Venom. I think ur sick on the mic though. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-09 17:36:48

fv Voted: Venomoussss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-10 11:55:28