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Posted on: 2013-05-06 16:44:13

good battle..respect to both one had forced punches wich kinda messed up good shit though..the other was smooth all around..no hate vb Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-06 16:54:55

iight Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:06:19

fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:08:13

Fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:28:00

Can't vote, Fellow crew member. Go2Sleep though nigga it's all good :P Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-06 21:16:12

fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-07 04:33:41

fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-07 12:32:29

Both were good but one was a little better Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-07 13:28:33

Damn good battle right here. Aight Lady- I think you really need to try and up your conceptuality a bit here, you were really doin straight disses. Alot of oneliner metaphors here and that's good for filler but not if you plan on doing an 8. You need to incorporate more setups and also fix up your rhyme scheme, it was pretty inconsistent being that it switched from 1to2to3 syllables (and that dash thing really fucked up readability in my opinion) seen better from you. Apoc- some real good shit in here. Reaaal good shit. That area 51 line was tight. You would've done the line more justice if you had made use of more relevant setups through the use of consecutive wordplay or something. Your opener was a bit iffy, but it gave that 3 line shock value but still buildup would've been good. Still a good concept. That 'you're the shit' concept was a bit played and the wording was a bit off as a technicality. The end punch was pretty decent that also had some wording problems but for me that stack of multies sort of compensated for that factor. Ending bar was good too but again you need to make better use of relevant setups AND again I think that your consistency with the multies somewhat offset that. Overall if you worked on making your bars a bit more conceptually cohesive that all the lines were connected, you would be alot more deadly than you already are. Good shit. Keep elevatin guys. (imaginary) Fair's in Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-07 18:51:10

fv boring read Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-07 19:05:31

fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-07 20:23:59

i liked first mc wordplay....good shit to both Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-08 02:55:48

gonna be 100% truthful...besides Fayz.. im pretty sure people just saw that ApocGod had a blue flame and automatically voted for him without reading both verses completely.. no expos nothing.. just "fv"... fuck that shit. im gonna read both verses and break both down completely and give detailed expos for each verse in a few minutes. people battle to get their name out their or to get better and u cant do either one if noone breaks the verses down in my opionion Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-08 09:32:45

fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-08 17:02:54

meh Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-08 23:00:55

Nothing too impressive to see hear... Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-09 01:23:57

one had a more polished flow scheme wise..punches werent too creative but did the job.. loser has potential just needs to clean up their multi usage and work on stronger wordplay. fairs in Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-09 02:50:54

i got to give it to Lady. That Shady line killed me.. lmao Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-09 03:41:40

Easy win here. One had an overall better verse and is on another level. Both need to up the creativity but one was just smoother and had nicer lines. Fairs in Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-09 11:16:38

fv Really no h8 Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-09 14:20:17

wow this was a really good battle...good work guys Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-05-09 15:30:25

save you from the riders? HAHA right. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-09 20:12:05