Good battling u again slickly, like old times. Yeah I only won by 1 vote last time. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 18:32:02

haha yeah man good shit. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 18:33:38

no tie buton Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-05 18:48:23

Ight slicky some tips for you .... You can obviously grasp basic multis as you where doing them in the start of your verse but then you went to shit and stated one word rhyming ... Also you have a lot of filler in between your rhymes this stops your verse flowing ... You need to up your multies in terms of the sylabels omce you have some this you then need to look into punch set ups and metaphors to help you deliver more effective insults against your opponent ... Snoopy ... Last bar was pretty dope but what a waste on a snipe battle see you have these good bars but you waste them on lesser opponents .... Good verse ... .;FV:. Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-05 20:10:25

Typo: THREE *SIXTEEN* Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 20:42:31

k, Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 00:19:41

SLICK - Alright your opener started with a good simple multi but then after that you turnout for the worst. You created a broken Multi, BOUND to WIN (2 or 3 with the to capped) with A-ROUND A-GAIN (4) so yeah just clean it up a bit also be careful not to use the same word in a Multi, it really shows your limits with words. Ok 4th and 5th line were messy, you have too much going on, first the Multis were terrible, second there was no actual punches and three the structure was not good at all and just when i thought things couldn't be any worst the next bars and closer had some of the most basic stuff you can come up with or in more harsher terms, it was TRASH. You had rhymed CANT and ANT?. First thing is learn from your mistakes fam, your first multis was straight but then you went downwards from there. So clean up the multis fam, tighten up your structure and think big with the concepts, don't be lazy. Not a good drop back 2 basics. [No Stand Out Line Here] SNOOP - Ok your mostly on point with most multis, make sure your lines make sense though fam, "n u can't PHYSICAL STOP THIS" does not make sense. Its PHYSICALLY so be careful when choosing your multi choice. You also said you were a "LYRICAL GODDESS?" wtf fam a goddess is female god. So yeah clean up that wording and proof read it, the concepts could do with some better setups too. So clean up your wording, keep working the concepts and punches and you'll be fine.Not a good drop but not a bad one either. Few flaws here and there.[Fav Line was Opening Line]. My winner took it with a more polished and 8 and multis. Fairs In, Low to Low, Return The Fair. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 02:37:11

fv nh Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 11:30:37

Fv Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 13:16:05

FV NO H8 Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 13:27:25

Fv Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 15:02:17

snoop all day, he's a beast, Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 15:46:51

thanks for the constructive criticism yall. im keep practicing thats for sure haha Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-06 16:34:29

fv Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 18:57:48

Ehhh. This was closer than it should've been. Slick- Your concepts were way to bare and obscure to be hard hitting. This amateurish style was really accentuated by your inconsistent monosyllabic rhyme scheme. Work on developing your concepts further to better you punches. Snoopy you were heading in the right direction but alot of your wording was really weird and made the verse sound just awkward. A few examples, 'Im a lyrical godess' a godess insinuates that you're a female. You basically punched yourself. Then that last line, where you say 3:16, that's not page 316, that refers to a chapter and a verse, there were other instances but those were some blatant ones. I expect better next time. Keep elevatiin. Pm for tips advice and expos. Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 21:10:00

6-8 Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 23:46:26

Close battle..Rhymes from both emcees didn't seem to impress me..I found that some of Snoopy's rhymes were slightly stretched...Feel free to send me 8 bars..Good lookin' out, props.. Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 00:36:59

I meant to vote for Snoopy cuz he has a A.V Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 00:38:01

Harry, u realized after u voted that u didn't even read the battle huh? faggit. next time read before u hate vote bruh. real talk man, ur blocked! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-07 00:42:02

fv , both a bit sloppy imo .. but shiet thats my vote Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 05:47:19

fv Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 10:06:30

fv Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-08 08:57:37

fv Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-08 10:47:30

easy vote, snoopy Voted: slicky / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-08 19:12:42