Ight ..... Drills ... I like your wording you can tell by the way people word they verse whether they gunna be any good you have potential stick around but got look up multis and try cutting the filler out in your bars also look up metaphors these are what we use to make punches hit harder .... Execute ... You have good metaphors just your multis seem to be getting mixed up with ya sylabels counts which is not helping the flow ... Comcepts on ya punches win you the battles .... FV .. .:X:. Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-03 12:32:02

good battle respect to both.fv vb Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-03 16:53:18

nono toide bouttmom Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-03 17:04:29

Honest in. Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-03 19:10:54

DAMN. Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-04 20:25:23

Ok my losers multis were all of the place. If umcappin shit make sure it atleast kinda rhymes otherwise it affects the readability of your drop. I can see u tried out some concepts but they didnt reallly come off to great and the links to the punches were quite weak. U were touchin on some nice ideas but they needed to be built on. Work on the above and keep active. My winners wording was a lot cleaner although it needed better structure. I liked ur swag, ur verse had good momentum with plenty of jabs, nothin too hard hittin, but jabbing none the less. Id say try and incorporate some wordplay or concepts to build on that flow that u got and ull do fine. Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-05 04:37:26

DRILLA - Ok not bad but not good, you have a good rhyme scheme and the structure isn't too bad unlike others i've seen but still you will need to tighten up that structure to have a much more smoother read also you would just change the flow up randomly, so keep a eye out that, always finish and execute your bars as well. You def need a multi game to up your rhyming to the next level, try flowing with a 3-5 syllable drop and i think you might just might surprise yourself. Also try to fix up the filler, this was covered with filler so thats where concepts and set ups come into play but for now work them other areas first, so tidy up the structure and develop a bigger multi game. Good Potential Here[Fav Line was the Closer] EXECUTE - Fam even if this was a snipe you really got to tighten up those rhymes itself. Most words didn't even rhyme, you have great potential because i've seen it but this was def not your best drop. Concepts were there, Multis were bait messy, Punches were ok but yeah just really tighten up your drop and also PROOF READ IT FAM. [Fav Line is the Opener]. Not your best drop fam. Both need some tweaks here and there. Fairs In. High To High APOC: Scream On'em Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-05 05:22:30

k, Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-06 01:16:14

gb Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-06 06:36:34

fv Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-06 11:41:57

damn i liked Drilla's never gotta relod line alot.but GB Voted: Drilla / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-06 12:07:26