Luke, Mark, John, Tom, Paul/Saul, Matthew, Titus, Philemon, Revelations, Peter, Andrew were all either disciples of Christ (12 apostles) or books in the New Testament, supporting my last line. Rock of ages was a movie about rock with Tom cruise in it sega char backwards rock [of] ages. The nursery rhyme reference was london bridge and row row your boat. If you need any further expo pm. Good shit ROW. Nice drop and good luck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-29 20:22:33

Nice little read will drop a vote tomoz with an expo .... Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-04-29 20:42:14

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Posted on: 2013-04-29 21:21:59

good stuff Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-04-29 22:30:59

nameplay/wordplay gave this to the winner. loser had an off rhyme scheme, wordplay was forced in areas.. buildups were dope tho. highs and lows. fv Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-04-30 17:37:25

OK im def gonna drop a vote+expo ......tomorrow. But dman this battle looks dope as fuck. Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-05-01 07:33:44

A VERY VERY GOOD BATTLE HERE (fayz asked me to pm an expo but im on ma phone so will jus type one up here)......FAYZ CONSTRUCTED HI BARS UP VERY WELL AN STAYED HELLA ON POINT WIT THA CONCEPT HE WOZ GOIN WIT, SOME REAL CLEVER SHIT IN THERE DID FEEL SOME OF THA WORDPLAYS WERE A LIL FORCED THO AND DIDNT WORK, ALSO FELT THIS WOZ SLIGHTLY CYPHERish IN PLACES BUT SOME OF PUNCHES AND THA WAY YOU BUILT SHIT UP ACTUALLY MADE IT WORK AS A BATTLE, LIKE SOME LUPE FIASCO TYPE SHIT haha......ROW HAS A LOT MORE SWAGGER TO HIS MATERIAL SINCE I LAST READ HIS SHIT, VERY GOOD WORDPLAYS BRO NO TRIP UPS AT ALL, DID FEEL SOME OF YA MULTIS WERE SLIGHTLY OFF IN PLACES AND SOME BARS WERE STRETCHED OUT BUT YOUR MATERIAL WOZ CONSISTANT AND WORDED IN A VERY STRONG WAY....... THIS IS A CLOSE CALL AN I ENJOYED BOTH VERSES EVENLY, I LOVED THA CONCEPT CHOICE FROM FAYZ AN HOW CLEVER HE WENT WIT IT, BUT I ALSO LIKED ROWS RESPONSE AN HOW HE WENT REAL PERSONAL WIT THA HITS......SHITS CLOSE BUT I GOTS A SLIGHT WINNER, AN DONT ASK ME WHO I VOTED FOR IM KEEPIN THIS ONE TO MASELF......GREAT BATTLE THO PROPS TA BOTH OF YA.....peace Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-05-01 12:27:20

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Posted on: 2013-05-02 15:17:36

It's not a battle with out an x-cal break down haaaa ..... Lets do it fayz ... Bar1 ... Look/luke domt work for me as a wordplay punch was meh but it was more about your concept which was dope but i prefer a hard punch anyway of the week personal preference 7.5/10 ... Bar2 ... Following the concept on still punch was ight but still about the concept nameplays are better than what you started with 7.5/10 ... Bar3 ... Long done London poor wordplay there fam that dont sound like that punches are cool ... Bar4 ... Ok still not hitting hard enough with these punches for me .... Ok right i see bar for bar is not the way to look at this verse as you have a concept you have rolled with through the whole verse the concept is dope as fuck but because you where so focused on the concept i feel like you lost the impact of punches so imma give you a 9/10 ...... Row let me look at your verse .... Bar1 .... Broken multi to start with the vets multi doesn't go .... The wordplay on rows uh rearrange is kinda forced but it works .... And carried an ok punch nice first bar 7.5/10 .... Bar2 .... Tripped the waiter punch was ight the lakers punch wasnt feeling ok bar nothing wow for me 7/10 .... Bar3 .... Hmmm personal i like but could of been executed a lot better for me Christmas Yule concept ive seen before 7/10 .... Bar4 ..... Multi was off for me wasnt flowing concept was coo 7/10 .... Bar 5 ..... Dope finisher shit should of been on this level through the whole battle 9/10 .... Ok as an overall verse imma give you 8.5/10 bar for bar it was close as a whole verse and a complete package i felt the one was more creative and clever and pulled of a concept very well shit was close tho be interesting to see the out come .... FV VBF .:X:. Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-05-02 16:01:36

Yeah he's right, there was no broken multi.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-02 21:57:26

Fayz - Ok the opener was dope no doubt except for the very first Wordplay which was forced but other then that way to open up with a odd concept but it was well executed. The next lines i wasn't really feeling, the concepts were good but i felt you cooled off after that opener. The wordplay wasn't hitting for me throughout the drop and i felt some lines were a bit too stretched. The closer had potential KO all over it but the wordplay disrupted the flow of words and the wordplay again wasnt pretty, half the closer was cold and hot but the wording could have been adjusted for a better execution. So your concepts were solid throughout and mainly on point some were on int and some were just dull. I felt some bars were stretched too the punch, you had some good punches but you also had a few cold ones. The concepts were on point especially the whole "Biblical Scheme" which i was feelin but some concepts seemed to be a bit… passive. The vocab was fine, the structure was good! not great! but it was good. Wordplay was up and down on this one, it was a deadly weapon in the top half but then it became your biggest flaw in the 2nd half. Overall a drop that was heavy but had a few minor but vital flaws. [Fav lines was the whole Opener] R o w, RoW, Sparrow - The opener was nicely set up, took a risk with thee Multis but it payed off, the punch was also was quite a good jab. The next few lines started off solid with "World Peace" concept. The following concept was ok ish but really didn't hit that hard basically a so so line that could have been better. But then came the "RD59" punches which were quite heavy imo really liked the flow of words with these lines which really help deliver some seroius bars also i liked the final punch and wordplay. Ahhh the closer, i Definitely wasn't feeling this the wording was not to good, this had a mix of everything that can go wrong,you had filler in there, rhyme scheme was off, structure was cluttered and the vocal was and multis were…somewhat messy which really ruined the final wordplay and punch imo. Overall a heavy drop also with minor flaws [Fav lines were the "Royce Da 59 Punches] 2 Good reads, a close battle but one pulled away here with consistency throughout his bars. Low to Mid. Fair Vote In. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 02:59:14

sorry, i had to write this on my Phone. Its annoying as fuck. Voted: Rounin /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 03:04:12

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Posted on: 2013-05-03 06:30:43

Good shit, Grats Row Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-03 11:24:26