Hahaha loved the elephant line. Fuck if I have more credits I'll take this. Good shit Heath! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-24 06:46:06

i think i shoulda kept going but it said 8 and i stopped. i think i coulda fit in another line. like its the real in me that causes your fake ass to feel envoy. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-24 06:46:28

Sorry snoop didn't see ya comment Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-24 06:50:00

thanks snoop couldent have got here with out u guys and the fv club. as much as it pisses me off, i respect wat fayz and u guys say and i think i understand. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-24 06:54:37

tough choice for me, x had good wordplay/punches as always, but i was really feeling heath on this one. props Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-24 11:33:37

much appreciated. thanks for reading. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-24 11:45:02

Xcalibur came with it, Health your punches ain't hard enough, think 'em out more get em Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-24 15:29:29

Fv vb Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-24 19:50:04

I already left an expo with tips in your guy's previous battle.. My choice got this with more creativity due to his set-ups but needs to watch his wording in some areas.. Spit your verse out loud before you drop it to make sure it sounds right.. His opponent needs to work on his multies, concept, set-ups and flow.. Take a look at some vet battles from DaDDiO, Revan and UNKNOWN ARTIST... Overall ok battle.. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 09:17:51

yeah thanks for the vote man. but you been reading too many battles. i think you got that last one confused with some one elses, we didnt talk about no momas. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-25 09:20:59

both went in this was a very good read, props to both. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 10:36:21

Alright my winner took this w/ better punches and a smoother flow. Other you need to work on setting up punchlines like phe told you in the last battle. Looks like your stepping up the multi game but try to keep it always about 2 syllables and make sure that they're not forced. Look at guys like (RULE,UA, Reefer) to get a better understanding of how to set up a battle verse and that will help you elevate. Always come correct w/ creative punches and swing for the fences and always go for the K.O. Fairs in high to low Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 19:57:20

*Above 2 syllables Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 19:58:02

im sorry my key style sint conplex evough for you, but i make shure my rhymes actualy rhyme and i dont just do shit and hope every one thinks it rhmyes too. it just dose with out trying. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-26 03:47:31

X killed em Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-26 11:19:57

Sorry I wasn't able to vote on this. Been Busy. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-27 17:01:27

it straight just pm what u think i need work on, im slacking. getting major criticisim. or w/e u spell it. its pretty critical too. been makeing me mad, amkng me think. id like your piece of mind if u have the time. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-28 06:11:29

if you squeeze a square it becomes retangular.. im calling this guy a square.[] Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-28 06:23:40