meant to say WOULDN'T let him ride with them. im tired lets beef neets spell check. no every won can win a spelling bee and be a rapper. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-23 08:31:45

Close battle . I think if one would've added more complexity it would be a different turn out Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-23 11:00:35

Fv good battle Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-23 11:30:49

My choice was stronger in all aspects here.. Here are some tips for his opponent.. Great concepts - Talking about someones mom is old unless there is creativity involved with it but the concept is very juvenile so try speaking on things that are going on in the news or with celebrities or evening talk about a volcano but make sure you convert it into a punchline and attack the hell out of your opponent.. theres so much to rap about and saying someones mom is fat or a hoe is very basic... Punchlines - Punches should always be executed strongly and in order to do so you want some strong set-ups with good concepts... Heres a bar of mine i used in the past...'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK"... Everything inside of the ' ' has to do with class and oral favors lol so those are set-ups for my punch which is inside the " " and the use of understanding was used as wordplay cuz under standing dick means under an erect dick and understanding dick means she understands it... You wanna provide punch after punch after punch and humiliate your opponent.... Set-up s - These are very important because they make the punch stronger... I showed you an example of what a set-up is when i was explaning the importance of punchlines... Always make sure your set-up has relevance to your multie/punch or else it will be seen as just filler... Your set-up leaves the reader wanting more and be sure to make your set-ups stand out by putting something around them such as ' ' or " " or ` ` will work just fine so that the reader knows exactly what your talking about... Do not decorate your verse either with different types of symbols like ~ or // or anything of that matter... Multies - Be sure to always provide multies that are at least 3-6 syllables cuz multies help with the flow and punch and if you dont know what a multie is then its the words that rhymes with each other when your going from line to line.. And always make sure the syllable count is exact and dont force your multies which means make sure there relevant... Take this for example again.... 'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK".... The words that are capitalized are my multies... So the words that are capped in my 1st line rhyme with the words that are capped in my 2nd which makes them multies... Always cap your multies and also always fill in your box like i do... Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 09:08:49

i dont know what battle you voted on, but we aint fucking talking about momas here, your vote is invalid. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-25 09:15:39

sir! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-25 09:16:05

and i aint talking about no ones girl here either, you might be the one who needs a lesson on concepts. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-25 09:17:04

Was a landslide here...One is on another level compared to his opponent. Other needs to work on concepts and punchlines....never rhyme anything under 2 syllables and you could learn a thing or two from your opponent here. Also Phe is one of the best voters on the site you fucking moron haha he knows what he is talking about so take a lesson from a vet you stupid kid...smh Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 19:51:47

get your ass beat by a kid. land side my ass x had off multis. fair voters club my ass, more like wanbe emcess, with forced flows. you cant tell me x's multis where on point u fuckers need to go back to elementary school. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-26 03:38:43

just look at x's first multis u fuckers..... i cant belive yall said that. what the fuck yall reading. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-26 03:40:14

One sided. Better all round in every category. Nothing much more to say. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-26 08:58:31

Heath what the fuck are you on about. His multis are bang on. STOPPING LIFE'S AND SMASHING BARS rhymes with HOT ON MICS AND RAPPING HARD which also rhymes with ROCKING LIKE HIS AVATAR. You clearly dont understand what multis are if think that there is a problem with that. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-26 09:03:35

idiot. HOT ON dose not ryme with ROCK ING.... go back to school kid. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-26 11:17:59

the vowle sound of ON was off. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-26 11:19:12

Walking is not a mutli syllable with fork-in either. im done talking about this. its clear dru dosent know what he talking about. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-26 11:20:46

100% of the voters seem to disagree with you Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-26 15:16:57

well all you are wrong. hot on dose not rhyme with rocking. u fucking idiots. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-28 06:07:52

niether dose the vowle sound of fork.... go the fuck back to school im done here. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-28 06:08:55