If no one taking this in 20 mins then imma take it. Voted: lenny chi / evillest
Posted on: 2013-04-22 03:01:03

Fv Voted: lenny chi / evillest
Posted on: 2013-04-22 03:57:11

Very leveled match up here. One need to work only multies and consistency. The other need to work on multies and structure in bars. Very close battle. One hit harder but not by much. Fair vote no hate. Voted: lenny chi / evillest
Posted on: 2013-04-22 07:58:38

Ok chi ... You need to sort out that structure man whats with all the back slashes shits Hella confusing you vocab is no point liked ya complexity and intelligence in your verse if you up your multies and metaphors and sort ya structure out you gunna be nice ... Evil ... I see your verse is on point some nice punches like the old habits die hard bar you need to cut all the filler out between your multies it will help with your flow and will also help deliver your punches with more impact ... But you have the basics in your arsenal the more you spit the more you'll learn ... FV VBF .:X:. Voted: lenny chi / evillest
Posted on: 2013-04-22 08:11:52

oh thanks 4 advice X-Calibur I use the slashes to seperate... uhm will work on the struct. too Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 15:02:11

pretty even fv better one had more punches Voted: lenny chi / evillest
Posted on: 2013-04-22 20:47:55

My winner had the overall better verse here. Had some slick punches and added to them w/ those multis. Just need to up the creativity is all. Other you were all over the place so just work on structure and making your multis hit. Fairs in high to high Voted: lenny chi / evillest
Posted on: 2013-04-24 16:47:36