I would of replied sooner but you sent it when I was off to bed ..... Keep trying little man you'll get der ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 06:43:28

X caught a body...apocalypse errydayyy.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 07:04:00

ok wolverine.X.we need to tell professor X that something is off with u..and X calibur rocked u..so the X factor is that u think u should try spitting outloud first..ur rhyme pattern, with the 2 bar schemesDISSAPEARED// PITCHED//you were NEAR//so u got hunt like a DEAR//ITCH//took ya WIT ME//i was HUNGRY//my stomach was EMPTY//ull DIE each TIME, like ur name was KENNY(southpark)//a PENNY for -ok saying that outloud w/in a 16 bar/8 bar beat pattern is not going to work..u sound brand new, so start from basics. like. YO my NAME is skin, i like to rap-my FLOW is FLAME /MAYNE/I write CRACK--there i LIKE THAT (multi) find where the PIPE AT/if u LISTEN learn, and burn-/ u do better than TYPE CRAP-highlighted words basic bar writing..the rhyme words match up-then the multi's match- Voted: Wolverinex / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-22 08:25:11

Fear the Apocalypse Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 10:49:30

Thanks skin Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 11:05:36

I'm gonna stop voting on your battles Wolverinex. Every battle I've seen your getting clear L's. I can't be on the side of voting you down all the time. Step your bars up. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 17:11:04

This was an easy decision.. My choice got this by being stronger then his opponent in every aspect.. Here are some tips for his opponent... Great concepts - Talking about someones mom is old unless there is creativity involved with it but the concept is very juvenile so try speaking on things that are going on in the news or with celebrities or evening talk about a volcano but make sure you convert it into a punchline and attack the hell out of your opponent.. theres so much to rap about and saying someones mom is fat or a hoe is very basic... Punchlines - Punches should always be executed strongly and in order to do so you want some strong set-ups with good concepts... Heres a bar of mine i used in the past...'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK"... Everything inside of the ' ' has to do with class and oral favors lol so those are set-ups for my punch which is inside the " " and the use of understanding was used as wordplay cuz under standing dick means under an erect dick and understanding dick means she understands it... You wanna provide punch after punch after punch and humiliate your opponent.... Set-ups - These are very important because they make the punch stronger... I showed you an example of what a set-up is when i was explaning the importance of punchlines... Always make sure your set-up has relevance to your multie/punch or else it will be seen as just filler... Your set-up leaves the reader wanting more and be sure to make your set-ups stand out by putting something around them such as ' ' or " " or ` ` will work just fine so that the reader knows exactly what your talking about... Do not decorate your verse either with different types of symbols like ~ or // or anything of that matter... Multies - Be sure to always provide multies that are at least 3-6 syllables cuz multies help with the flow and punch and if you dont know what a multie is then its the words that rhymes with each other when your going from line to line.. And always make sure the syllable count is exact and dont force your multies which means make sure there relevant... Take this for example again.... 'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK".... The words that are capitalized are my multies... So the words that are capped in my 1st line rhyme with the words that are capped in my 2nd which makes them multies... Always cap your multies and also always fill in your box like i do... Voted: Wolverinex / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-22 18:05:25

Landlside victory here. My winner got it with a cleaner execution although his rhyming was a little stretched at times, but he came with good concepts and a decently solid execution. Loser needs to get off monosyllabics and needs to up their content all the way. Fair's in Voted: Wolverinex / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-22 20:40:13

pretty onesided, one brought better nameflips, as well as rhyme schemes... Voted: Wolverinex / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-24 04:31:23

Phenomenom thanks for takin the time to show an example appreciate it Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-24 19:09:34

Fairs In! eAsy win hear, Voted: Wolverinex / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-25 04:32:32