Let's get it in .... Row ... Bar1 ... Hmmm to much filler between ya multis punch was ight but cud of been worded better 6/10 ... Bar2 ... This was like bar 2 & 3 together shit went off inthe middle but pulled it back nicely at the end punch was coo nice bar 7/10 ... Bar4 ... Punch concept was nice but multis Hella forced and ya sylabels where out 6/10 .... Snoopy .... Bar1 ... Ight cool opener nothing hard but sets it up nicely letsbee whet you do with the other bars 6/10 ... Bar2 ... Punch was cool liked it but multis where off .... 6.5/10 ... Bar3 .... Hmmmm flow was choppy punch could of been Hella better ... 6.5/10 ... Bar4 ... Felt the nameplay was forced punch was cool tho 6/10 ..... Shit was a close battle but for me one just flowed better with less filler ... Fair as always ... FV VBF .:X:. Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-04-22 13:06:04

Seen both of you guys do a hell of a lot better but either way. My winner took this battle w/ more consistency of creative lines. Though the other had a higher punch count he didn't connect on all of them and bar for bar was a little more played out. Continue to drop creative bars fellas nice spar here. Fairs in Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-04-22 14:58:06

my winner here came wit slightly more creative concepts.. fairs in Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-04-23 04:51:47

Pretty one sided here. Row- You had some decent concepts with a moderately fair execution. It wasn't on par with your usual material, but it did enough. Your concepts didn't live up to their full potential and on top of that your wording was a bit off at times, but nothing really major. Snoop- You had some forced rhyming at times and some of the concepts were a bit played or premature. Your wordplay was probably the biggest thing that detracted from your verse (or a failed attempt at it). For one, cook-his-rooks checkmate line was just worded weirdly and the angle you took on that very broad concept was pretty generic. Furthermore raw/Row is a very forced sample of wordplay. They have to sound similar or look identical in some shape or form. Overall, my winner came with harder hitting punches and concepts and with a stronger execution. Fair's in. Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-04-23 20:37:05

x-cal never ceases to amaze me. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-10 11:16:53