I hope a rookie take this. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-19 00:54:49

gb Voted: Jmoneyakagunshot / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-04-19 01:45:46

Fv Voted: Jmoneyakagunshot / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-04-20 12:17:41

Poor battle here. Legit- You need to work on your multies, make sure they're 3-5 syllables and only capitalize the ones the match up. Also your wordplay was really forced and nonsensical. You had no anchoring concept that drew your concepts together, it just seemed you were making random words out of other words. Shots- You had better readability but you drifted into cyphering for a bit, and your punches left much to be desired. I really liked that last concept, however the way you presented it did it no justice whatsoever. You should've said something like 2 is beside himself or Ill split 2 in half and flip him around, something that would've made it channel as an actual punch, that line really only showed your ability to make the concept but you need to work on connection. Overall, my winner showed more complexity and connected more punches. Keep elevating. Fairs in. Voted: Jmoneyakagunshot / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-04-20 17:47:52

Neither impressed and both lacked creativity.. My choice got this with better multies and flow but both need to provide fresh concepts, good set-ups that relate to your multies but is also converted into a punch and also work on being more creative but be sure your shit makes sense... Overall not a good battle.. Voted: Jmoneyakagunshot / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-04-20 20:32:23

Ones last line was pretty dope no lie. still seemed like multies over punches here. Fairs in. Voted: Jmoneyakagunshot / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-04-21 12:26:34

Lol I'm in FVC for a reason... Voted: Jmoneyakagunshot / ApocGod
Posted on: 2013-04-21 15:56:11