Tried replying to your open but that other dude took it reply ASAP Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 21:08:55

it's ok, responded fast since you did it way before. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 22:07:02

No problems man G'd luck .:X:. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 22:08:04

X-cabiluar that was great bro Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-14 03:39:58

one was just more polished Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-14 07:04:17

Lanslide battle here. Winner is on another level that Is all I need to say about him maybe up the creativity a bit. Other you at least filled the box but you need to work on multisyllable rhyming and working on punchlines. You had a bunch of filler which effected your verse too. Learn a thing or two from your opponent. Low to Low fairs in Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-14 15:53:50

XCAL- alot of irrelavent filler multis,, concepts to personals was okaish.. ARCH-work on how you structure your verse.. didnt really know where one bar ended and the other one begins.. kinda just rambled on here...winner a bit more polished in his verse. fairs in.. Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-15 02:08:41

My choice got this by being a level up on his opponent in about every aspect such as multies, concepts, flow, punches and set-ups.. Here are some tips for his opponent.. Multies - Be sure to always provide multies that are at least 3-6 syllables cuz multies help with the flow and punch and if you dont know what a multie is then its the words that rhymes with each other when your going from line to line.. And always make sure the syllable count is exact and dont force your multies which means make sure there relevant... Take this for example again.... 'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK".... The words that are capitalized are my multies... So the words that are capped in my 1st line rhyme with the words that are capped in my 2nd which makes them multies... Always cap your multies and also always fill in your box... Set-ups - These are very important because they make the punch stronger... I showed you an example of what a set-up is when i was explaning the importance of punchlines... Always make sure your set-up has relevance to your multie/punch or else it will be seen as just filler... Your set-up leaves the reader wanting more and be sure to make your set-ups stand out by putting something around them such as ' ' or " " or ` ` will work just fine so that the reader knows exactly what your talking about... Do not decorate your verse either with different types of symbols like ~ or // or anything of that matter... Punchlines - Punches should always be executed strongly and in order to do so you want some strong set-ups with good concepts... Heres a bar of mine i used in the past...'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK"... Everything inside of the ' ' has to do with class and oral favors lol so those are set-ups for my punch which is inside the " " and the use of understanding was used as wordplay cuz under standing dick means under an erect dick and understanding dick means she understands it... You wanna provide punch after punch after punch and humiliate your opponent....Great concepts - Talking about someones mom is old unless there is creativity involved with it but the concept is very juvenile so try speaking on things that are going on in the news or with celebrities or evening talk about a volcano but make sure you convert it into a punchline and attack the hell out of your opponent.. theres so much to rap about and saying someones mom is fat or a hoe is very basic... Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-15 17:14:50

X's opener stormed it for me. fair's in. Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-16 07:52:45

TASTE THA PANE lol......ONE HAD MORE THROUGHOUT HERE, A DECENT READ THO I DID CRACK A SMILE A FEW TIMES.....FAIRS IN....holla Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-16 11:40:11

no contest. Voted: X-Calibur / Archetype
Posted on: 2013-04-17 00:42:29