Fairs in, Q's out. Posted on: 2013-04-15 18:29:12

Mine I'm taking it Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 17:21:52

I think i may have this , bro x Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 17:58:03

When I said I'm taking it I meant as in replying dude not as in winning it .... Good luck bruh .:X:. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 18:00:22

but which ever great battle man x Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 18:02:35

Clear winner here. Was a landslide one had them multis and punches hitting. The other your verse belongs in the cypher dude you need to aim your bars at your opponent and incorporate punch lines into your bars to make them hit hard. Fairs in low to low Voted: Fire Storm / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-14 15:12:56

one took this wit better use of concepts/and flips.. other pretty straight disses coupled wit really basic endrymes..fairs in Voted: Fire Storm / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-15 01:43:28

Fire Storm Here are some necessities to winning a text battle.. Great concepts - Talking about someones mom is old unless there is creativity involved with it but the concept is very juvenile so try speaking on things that are going on in the news or with celebrities or evening talk about a volcano but make sure you convert it into a punchline and attack the hell out of your opponent.. theres so much to rap about and saying someones mom is fat or a hoe is very basic... Punchlines - Punches should always be executed strongly and in order to do so you want some strong set-ups with good concepts... Heres a bar of mine i used in the past...'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK"... Everything inside of the ' ' has to do with class and oral favors lol so those are set-ups for my punch which is inside the " " and the use of understanding was used as wordplay cuz under standing dick means under an erect dick and understanding dick means she understands it... You wanna provide punch after punch after punch and humiliate your opponent.... Set-ups - These are very important because they make the punch stronger... I showed you an example of what a set-up is when i was explaning the importance of punchlines... Always make sure your set-up has relevance to your multie/punch or else it will be seen as just filler... Your set-up leaves the reader wanting more and be sure to make your set-ups stand out by putting something around them such as ' ' or " " or ` ` will work just fine so that the reader knows exactly what your talking about... Do not decorate your verse either with different types of symbols like ~ or // or anything of that matter... Multies - Be sure to always provide multies that are at least 3-6 syllables cuz multies help with the flow and punch and if you dont know what a multie is then its the words that rhymes with each other when your going from line to line.. And always make sure the syllable count is exact and dont force your multies which means make sure there relevant... Take this for example again.... 'Class is in session for ya hoe', so as my belt BUCKLES SMOTHERED im RAMMING LIPS I gave her 'sex ed' and she passed the 'educational facial' with "no TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK".... The words that are capitalized are my multies... So the words that are capped in my 1st line rhyme with the words that are capped in my 2nd which makes them multies... Always cap your multies and also always fill in your box... Voted: Fire Storm / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-15 16:44:14

FAV LINE WOZ 'X THA WEATHERMAN' THA WAY AH TAKE 'STORM OFF THA MAP' LIKED THA OPENER TOO....STORM HAS POTENTIAL THERE WERE PARTS THROUGH THA VERSE THAT WIT MORE TIME COULDA BEEN SUMMIT.....BUT X-CAL IS TOUGH EVEN WHEN RUSTY....FAIRS IN...holla Voted: Fire Storm / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-16 11:26:09