Fairs in, Q's out. Posted on: 2013-04-15 18:27:44

kind of straight forward my drop. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-12 21:42:37

A short expo: Air Row/Arrow. Closer relates to him joining Starz his crew. The rest just get to thinkin. - Give'm The Cold Shoulder...GB GL... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-12 21:47:05

iiiiiiiight, Roww.. as a mentor and a nigga who brought tha ('ll) wp bak... im letting ukno that ur usin it wrong, well tha first time u used it correct. Rev V will Leave... Second time was forced as fuk.... V will wont been seen?? wp has to work both ways or its a fail, other than, flow was A-1 concepts were decent but tha punch brought them to life. iiiiiiight verse, i see u flexing on tha send, jus tighten up tha wording. Valid... i read ur first bar and said, this battle bouta be intense. But it is whaaa it is... Up that Structure first.. Ur punches are coming along but ur multie count needs polishing.. other than, u had tha concepts to win..well besides that 2nd bar. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-13 01:26:44

This was a really close battle.. I'm leaning one way cuz of smoothness but the other way had slightly stronger punches but neither were as consistent as they could of been.. Both could work on their wording one more then the other.. Neither impressed me with concepts but both had some ok ideas but could have executed them a lot better... Yall should take a look at some vet battles and maybe it'll help you understand what exactly it is that your missing.. Overall decent battle.. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-13 10:05:01

one had some forced wordplay, while the other's flow was all over the place, good concepts from both and some nice punches too, close battle but my winner executed thoroughly and had a stronger verse overall with better connections and less wording problems, fairs in Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-13 11:09:57

Decent spar going on here. Felt though that one had some forced wp which really hurt the smoothness of his verse. Had a couple of nice lines and the concepts were alright but the wp is what hurt them. The other just had a smoother verse and a couple of decent nameplay bars. Needs to up the creativity though because the concepts were ok. A line that was pretty played however Winner just edged this battle w/ smoothness Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-13 11:58:34

Felt one was connecting better with personals and punches here .... Both very nice verses roww had two stand outlines and val you had one .... All in all very nice battle nice to read some good stuff on here still props FV VBF .:X:. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-13 20:03:44

Fair vote. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-13 22:22:44

one's W/P was kinda off.. both wasnt all that great in execution.when it came to punches one was smoother and the other was stronger, but consistancy plays a role as well, concepts could have been stronger but hey.. there're a lot of played ones out there so cant blame some for trying.. overall almost close but i edge it to edge and consistency.. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-14 08:45:27

This was a really close battle. RoWW- I liked some of the angles you played but the wording in your verse was really off. The verse as a whole didn't sound "awkward" but it didn't seem natural. This essentially really detracted for your verse. Another thing was your wordplay, those two factors of our verse combined really caused the overall execution of the verse to lacking. Because it was somewhat convoluted with the wordplay and execution I don't think the concepts and the punches went as far as they could've gone. I think the single greates thing that disappointed me were the angles that you missed. You did alot of nameplay that could've gone over alot smoother. Validation- your punches were slightly more solid however you tied in with some filler that was completely unnecesarry and was cypherish. Overall this one was hard to choose. I felt that although ones bars were slightly lacking, he compensated for it with consistency. Fairs in keep elevatin. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-14 12:09:05

this was really close..ones wordplay was top notch and the others punches were nice..one just took it by a cunt hair Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-14 14:54:42

Must admit my drop is terrible. But it will be back to normal on the rematch you can count that. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-14 18:12:11

first off im seeing alot of irrelevant setups in both verses.. both hqve the fundamentals down and an idea of concept wordplay.. so now you need to keep the idea and tie it in from setup to punch.. my winner here had slightly better complexity in multis and a bit more creative nameflips and puns. fairs in. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-14 19:13:46

fv Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-14 20:20:30

Better execution. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-14 21:42:03

starz! “V’ll-wont-be-se en” like a VEGETARIAN BRUNCH! you said V "will" Won't Be Seen... Fix Up That Wordplay... Go Hard Every battle. Perfections What We Work For Homie!!And Keep Your Wordplay Here.. Don't Get Too More Intricate In The Future.. These Are Nice smooth Wordplays.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-15 17:54:09

oh yeaa,.. MonSTARZ Don't Sweat The Technique!. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-15 17:54:37

fairs in one was slightly better put together in my opinion..good battle Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-15 19:25:18

Agree w/ ILLo, some of the set-ups are irrelevant to the punches, concepts are there, just execution needs to be hit. Felt this was almost even the whole way through, but one's closer definitely took it home. Fair's in fellas. Voted: Doomsday™ /
Posted on: 2013-04-15 21:04:29