Albert Anastasia: Mobster that founded MURDER INC (INK) Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-01 19:16:23

gotta give to val nice battle Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-01 21:31:43

One was more consistant here. Fairs in. Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-02 10:43:41

Both had wording issues but my choice had better concepts and stronger set-ups and execution... Both need to be more smoother with there writing and a little more complex.. Also my choice needs to watch his syllable count within his multies.. Overall this was an ok battle.. Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-02 15:40:23

one was slightly stronger conceptwise and less filler filled .. Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-03 01:51:11

Decent little spar here fellas. One took this w/ some nicer punches. Felt my winner was more consistent. Both need to step up the creative concepts though. Fairs in and low to low Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-03 17:32:14

one was jus better here in every cat. vally, maybe u shud up ur competition famzo, test yaself....ukno????? Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-04 03:26:03

Close battle.. Both had some issues but have alot of potential. Fair's In. No hate Fellas. -Acid's Out. Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-04 10:42:23

@GRizz yeah I'm just getting back into it , trying to rub the 3 year absence rust off . Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 14:45:15

Straight battle here. Killa- For one, work on your spelling. When you rap like that it really detracts from the verse and your credibility as a rapper. Your verse was erratic and very inconsistent. You need to work on developing your concepts more and upping the conceptuality. That Rubik's cube line would've been pretty dope had you focused on making it more valid as concept what I mean by this is you should've one, made better setups, two, made the thing it was related to more unique and hardhitting , and 3 reworded it. The test of your verse was pretty mediocre, cypherish at times and just kind of all over the place. Validation- Kinda rusty here. You started off kind of slow. That's shots to the face seems like a recycled concept. While the wording is different, the actual concept itself is pretty similar. I would not advise using it again. Your other lines were pretty weak in comparison to what I've seen but they did damage. I don't know why but that Shots to te liver line was way to simplistic for my taste. If you had reworded it and made it a little harder to draw recognition between the concepts in order to emphasize its complexity it would've ultimately played better. That closer was killer though (though I'm not sure if light bulbs use Milliwats but w.e) Overall one was edging with complexity. I see potential in both. Just need to work on structuring and wording. Voted: KillΔWatt / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-04 16:40:56