Someone's been elevating up, good to see. Fairs in, Q's out. Posted on: 2013-03-06 06:54:28

Good battles though gotta say that MadVerbs got this "Yo I HEARD HE A DRAG QUEEN that wldn't 'Drive w/ a Iron' tryna get BIRDIES ON BACKSWING'S." Voted: B U R D E N / Eye G
Posted on: 2013-03-06 03:25:00

lolz...ukno/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:23:01

My choice got this with a cleaner and stronger verse.. My choice set-up his punches and executed them nicely.. His concepts werent all that fresh but his verse still did enough.. He also had a nice flow while his opponent failed to set-up his punches which led to a basic and even weak punch at times and his concepts were also weak... Start setting up your punches with references and metaphors that are relevant to your punch/multie... Overall decent battle... Voted: B U R D E N / Eye G
Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:53:15

Mad, you were sort of simplistic and some of your wording was off. And by that I mean some of it didn't make sense which I think is due to execution. Eye, you didn't have any real punches. You were also very simplistic and didn't throw anything substantial in. Fair is in. Voted: B U R D E N / Eye G
Posted on: 2013-03-06 15:29:23

MAD- not a bad verse, a few played concepts here and there, ex. anything to do wit golf=iron wordplay, show up to light house felt random, didnt really get what you meant by that ,, him lighting up someones house wit bullets? schemes were decent EYE G, fam, change your name to eye sore, cause reading all the mispelling, and missing words, made reading your verse extremely hard to follow,multis were poorly done, CUPID FA REAL, PUBIC HAIR? SHOCKMY BRAIN ORDICK? COCK A MEN YA WEAK.. on a good note, what i did like was you using certain references to strengthen your concepts, ex. the 'wild and out' wit mariah bitch.. but your wording weakened it, i wouldve started off the bar wit references to nick cannon, maybe use 'cannon' as a metaphor for weapon, but double meaning it to include wild and out, then towards mariah.. anyway, work on cleanin up your multi usage, maybe start off wit easier multis, 3 syllable, get comforatable, then focus on concepts/ similes etc..you 'll get alot better, .. anyway, winner here a bit more polished in more elements of a battle verse.fairs in Voted: B U R D E N / Eye G
Posted on: 2013-03-08 01:32:09

@ILLoKWENT™ thanks mate for ya suggestions i really appreciate it ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-08 01:51:52