A bit rushed but it's what it is. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:01:57

na, I don't wanna hear no excuses boii Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:03:56

yo thats some ill shit right thur.. i remember you verbs, remember me.. youve gottin better Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:06:39

I told u to wait till I had my bars but instead I typed this within half hour- an hour idk even know. Point is I didn't spend the time I would have on it so don't be a hoe. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:07:17

he needs time to type some irrelevant random sht that wasn't even personal? & maybe next time you shouldn't vote for ya lil hoe. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:09:38

I don't know you.. how personal could it get. God damn it's dumb ass fuckers like you that help kill this site. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:11:49

lmao are you dumb? personal as in rap wise & coming with concepts, name flips, bars @ ya city, avatar, titles, anything towards you. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:13:29

You hardly did any of that^ now shut up. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:15:30

actually all of my bars were about that you dikhead. lmao irl, you're 1 wack rapper & then you have the nerves to vote on people's battle. Probably why you hate voted cuz my bars go over ya head. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:19:21

Shut The Fuck Up! haha this is not the place to blow up w/ yo shit talking. It's fo VOTES Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:20:29

yet if we scroll'd up you commented first. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:24:51

Prospect that opener was surprisingly good. If it had less filler and was executed better then it would have been solid. Next scheme was iffy, The punch is played and the multis were a drag, too much filler..... Liked the Madagascar scheme but it was forced. You ended on a bad note, seriously thats the noobiest punchline ever. Average verse, too many faults.......... Mad the Slaughterhouse punch was nice..Really liked that dying to see scheme that was clever... Closer was nice too. Opener= Pro Closer= Mad Wordplay=Tie M ultis=Mad(pro lost sylabel count) Punches= Mad was more consistant FA IR VOTE AND HONEST RATE IS IN Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 01:46:59

gb took a min but fv it is Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 03:26:27

close battle, felt ones personals, but the reuse of the same line to expo the preceding one, took away lines that couldve been used for other concept to punches, it was creative tho no doubt.. but shouldnt be used wit line constraints.. that ultimately weakend what was turnin out to be a very nice verse.. other was a bit weak, wit some played concepts but stayed consistent thru out.. close battle but one edged it here because of certain aspects.. fairs in.. Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 03:50:17

pretty dope battle here yo. Both brought some decent punches and multies. I think the winner was a lil more solid from 1-16 tho. The loser also was hurt by doing the whole 'slow it down' shit. that's mad played yo. all in all I had one barely edging this tho. fairs in. Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:17:23

Pro: Your opener was a pretty dope but your set ups took to long to get to it and affected the punch a bit. Also no need to repeat what you just said this isn't an audio just put in 'this' or (that) it was super annoying and really affected your verse they way you did it twice. Madagascar line was dope as well in my opinion but you repeated the line even though we all knew where you were going with it. You have some nice lines, your multis are on point and your punches and wordplay is strong. Just need to stop repeating lines and work on more relevant set ups to get to the punch. Verbs: I thought your first two punches were your strongest and the dying to see was real creative and nice. Had a lot of more jabbish lines but they were consistent and still packed a decent punch. The flow was on point and so was the structure of your bars. Closer was pretty damn nice too. One took this battle with a more consistency. Fairs in fellas and generous rates here Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:34:17

so basically I lost cuz I repeated 2 lines for the first time? lol @ this Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:52:59

I know, i tried changing the style for these text battlers cuz every1 do the same sht & when I try being diff they just look for negative about it, lmao smh. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 13:13:00

The whole repeating lines shit is whack yo, so stop ya bitching. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 14:39:35

I wasnt btch some, you wack af rofl these votes got em hype. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 14:48:34

Mad close but one edged it with a beasty ass verse and deadly punches. Props to both, one of the best I have read yet to be honest. Prospect is sick though, Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 15:53:05

The fair's in. Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 16:35:21

wordplay and decent personals vs. wordplay and humor. cool sparr very close, it was a tie until the closer and the winner here has the best closer while the other felloff closing his last bar. niiiiiice battle! i likes. fairs in. Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 16:57:03

Prospecxt: that whole firsat build up to the xbox line dulled your entire verse. wasn't that niice tbh. i also see alotta the time just lack of info. hurts you, at one point you said mad was in the fvc... which he is not lol also alot of filler and small everyday punches/ mad you gotta buld delivery in your punches cause i can see the potential it just needs critiqued. like tht bullet in thew eye concept, good line. butt, could have been executed better// GONZO vote Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 20:03:49

fv Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-28 23:07:14

JS: that opener first of all had a bit of filler on it. cut back on that. second... dope wp. except that wording was off for me. i had to re-read it to see what you meant. mad in X box. that's dope like i said but you should have said "That aint the only time you've been 'MAD IN X BOX'!" the first time so the audience immediately feels it and re-worded the set up better instead of wasting a bar repeating it. the rest of the verse... is see a bit of filler. then you re-saying you punch again. learn to do it right once and not wrong twice. MadVerbs: why did you start wit a slaughterhouse punch and end with a played math concept? why? smh... the verse was very eh. now dying to see and the closer was dope. dont make this light shit a habit son. fv. Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-29 02:31:27

Pretty close battle but one had way too much filler (even if the second repeated line had a differentiating it would've served better to just use those lines for more punches and then do an expo about the double meanings.) He had good multies that reminded me alot about Culpritts style. But a few multies were forced and some played concepts. My winner just a smooth read by downplaying his multies (in comparison to The losers) it left less room for forced multies and a bigger focus on concepts and punches. More consistency. Good battle fairs in. I'd say rematch Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-29 11:41:24

good shit the fairs in Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-29 13:27:45

This was pretty close.. My winner was just more consistent, even tho i almost went the other way based on the fact that the challenger had 2 punches that were better than all of the winners punches, parts of the challengers verse were awkward and threw me off a lil. note to challenger: the concepts for your first 2 punches were pretty sick dude, but the multis were strange, and also when you used another line to explain your wordplay it kinda ruined it for me. FV all day yo Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-30 04:09:35

Prospect, You had some nice shit..Real Talk. That being said, the rewind thing doesn't really work on a text battle. Mad, you came nice too, bars were up and down. Fairs in. Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-30 14:33:02

JESUS!! This is one dope battle! Prospect, your opener was pretty good, i dunno about illokwent, but i kinda liked the whole rewind thing... you kept the punchlines coming and they were consistent, i felt your finisher could have been better though, over all good verse. Madverbs - I like what you did with the slaughterhouse bit, housegang! lol but your verse was good, opener was good, your inner-rhymes were nice too and a nice finisher too. Imma give this to the one who i think came a little harder. FV Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-30 21:59:07

Close shit Voted: Jewry Kane / B U R D E N
Posted on: 2012-12-30 23:21:36

vs MadVerbs Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-09 00:25:45

lol what? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-09 00:26:59

lol na ^ I was just writing down my opponent's name so in the future if you change your name, these folks won't get confused @ the personals. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-09 00:28:23